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Personal statement Psychology (university track)



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Jul 13, 2025   #1
As children, life is simple. Our biggest worries revolve around play, curiosity, and the small joys of everyday life. But as we grow, the world changes responsibilities increase, expectations grow heavier, and the once clear path ahead can become uncertain. For many, especially young people, this transition is overwhelming. Some struggle under the pressure to succeed, while others fight silent battles, turning to self-harm, substance abuse, or even suicide to cope.

I have seen firsthand how deeply emotional challenges can affect an individual how easy it is for emotional wounds to grow unnoticed, and how often people suffer in silence because they feel no one truly understands. Witnessing this sparked something in me. I want to understand the human mind, not just through textbooks and theories, but through real-life stories, emotions, and experiences.

What drew me to South Korea is more than its academic prestige. It is the country's shifting focus on mental health, human development, and social progress. Becoming aware of the psychological struggles many young people face, particularly the rising rates of emotional burnout and self-harm, I felt a strong conviction to understand these issues at their roots. The work of psychologists like Sang-Min Lee and Soo Yeon-Suh showed me how powerful research can be when it addresses real-life problems. This influence deepened my interest in studying the human mind within a system that values both scientific advancement and cultural depth. Korea's evolving society, strong educational structure, and deep-rooted traditions make it the ideal place for me to begin this journey.

I believe this opportunity will equip me not only with academic tools but also with the perspective and experience needed to grow into someone who can respond to the emotional needs of my generation. I completed high school two years ago, graduating among the top ten students in my class. Unfortunately, due to financial difficulties, I was unable to continue directly to university. However, that did not stop me from staying focused on my academic goals. I remained committed to my passion for learning, especially psychology, and used this time to explore its foundational concepts. I took the initiative to study the core principles of psychology, watch lectures, and engage with educational content to build a strong foundation. This journey has only strengthened my passion and determination, and I am now fully prepared to apply for this program and pursue my academic path with clear purpose.

Beyond academics, I have taken part in experiences that have shaped my ability to connect with people and understand responsibility. Volunteering at MANI's organization gave me the chance to support others and show genuine empathy something I believe is essential in both life and psychology. I also assisted with outreach to orphanages, which challenged me to think creatively, work with others, and step into leadership when it mattered most. These experiences have taught me how to contribute meaningfully to any environment, and I look forward to bringing that same energy and mindset to university life in South Korea.

When searching for universities, I learned about Yeungnam University and was impressed by its strong academic programs, research environment, and excellent support for international students. I was especially drawn to the university's focus on research and its facilities that help students combine theory with practical experience. The wide range of courses offered, the emphasis on community contribution, and supportive programs like the Buddy Program and Language Partner Program showed me that Yeungnam University truly cares about helping students grow academically and personally.

All of these aspects inspired me and motivated me to choose Yeungnam University as the place where I will develop my knowledge, strengthen my research skills, and contribute meaningfully to the field of psychology.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 15921  
Jul 13, 2025   #2
This essay cannot be submitted to the GKS-U screening committee. I understand that you may have come across this particular scholarship as a user of this forum and you may have looked it up online. You liked what you read about the scholarship and decided to take a shot. However, the GKS scholarship is very particular about the information they ask for from their candidates. That is why there is a downloadable application packet that all applicants are required to download. The essay guidelines, content requirements, and writing expectations can be found in that file. I strongly advise that you download the packet and write the personal statement / motivational statement based on the included writing guide. Your current version does not fall within the required information.


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