can you help me improve this little "essay"?PROMPT:
STUDY PLANS TO IMPROVE FOREIGN LANGUAGES (KOREAN, ENGLISH, ETC) REQUIRED FOR TAKING A BACHELOR'S DEGREE COURSE.
BEFORE and AFTER you come to Korea.
BEFORE I CAME TO KOREA
If you master the language, then you will rule the world. This sentence is what motivated me to learn foreign languages. Since English is the language I will use to learn Korean, I will always improve my skills in each language. Currently, to improve my English skills, I study through online articles, magazines, and I also plan to write an essay of at least 3 paragraphs a day. In concern for my speaking abilities, I have a friend who is studying English literature, so I will train with her, we will only communicate using English, either through speaking in person or only via text message.
Since grade 2 high school, I have been interested in the Korean language. Since then I have started studying hangul via the internet. Now I will seriously improve my Korean language skills. I will start by buying Korean language learning books, dictionaries, and other study support books for me. Not only through books, but I also learn through articles and simple books in Korean, podcasts, online videos, applications, Korean films, and TV shows. To deepen my understanding, I will take an online language course. In my spare time, I will also watch Korean news programs for updates on the situation in Korea, the country I will live in. I also like listening to Korean music, then I will rewrite the lyrics I hear and interpret them.
AFTER I CAME TO KOREA
Once in Korea, I will take Korean language training and I will work hard to finish with a topic score of 5. I will use the existing facilities at the university such as the language center and library. Because I already in Korea I meet Korean people and interact with them, this helps me in my learning process. I plan to invite my friends to create a community to discuss the Korean language, sharing knowledge with each other.
Apart from trying very well for Korean, I will also do my best to improve my English skills by communicating with international students currently studying in South Korea.