My Study Plan for Masters in China

can you help me critique my study plan please

My name is xxxxxxx, and I am applying for a Master's degree program in applied economics at Xian Jiaotong University in China. I am a graduate of the University of Ghana with a degree in Economics and Chinese. I am eager to further my education in China due to its exceptional academic environment and innovative research opportunities. This study plan outlines my academic background, professional experience, research interests, reasons for choosing China, and future plans.

Academic Background
I completed my undergraduate studies in Economics and Chinese at the University of Ghana with a CGPA of 2.8 out of 4.00. During my undergraduate years, I actively engaged in various curricular and co-curricular activities, enhancing my academic and interpersonal skills. Through my studies and coursework in economic research, I gained significant practical and research experience, particularly in developing effective methodologies.

My coursework included subjects such as Introduction to Economics, Microeconomics, Macroeconomics, Labour Economics, Agricultural Economics, and various levels of Chinese language and literature studies. These courses have equipped me with a solid foundation in Economics. Additionally, I completed a course on "Research Methods," where I conducted a literature review on effective research methodologies in economics, analyzing over 25 articles and research papers.

One at a time please.

You have not submitted your actual study plan. The outline form that you posted was edited for content automatically as only the first paragraph would be acceptable for the presentation in an outline form. As such, I have no study plan to review for your presentation. Anyway, a study plan is pretty specific when it comes to these scholarships. You should either focus on language learning or, your possible thesis presentation. For your language learning, it should be how you are learning Mandarin before and after your arrival in China. For the thesis, this is only a preliminary presentation. It should give the reviewer an idea of what you plan to focus on for your final year of study and how the university can help you achieve your study goals for that topic. You may still change that topic during the actual final year, should you be admitted into the scholarship program and university.

You have to write details about your academic background; for example, your achivement in competition, extra curriculum,...