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Please state in the space provided below or on a separate sheet of paper, in your own words, the reasons for this application. Some indication of your financial situation would be helpful. We would also like to know about any achievements you are proud of (academic and/or otherwise) and how you expect your studies to influence your future career. You can also mention how you feel the scholarship and studying at a UK Higher Education Institution will benefit you (and /or your community) when you return home.
As an Indian citizen, It has been my ambition to augment the positive contributions made in the ever growing software industry, with the aim to use the knowledge gained into building applications that benefit rural India, where many reside unaware of their rights to quality education which could lead to subsequent employment and sustained growth. Having been raised in the Middle East,I considered my upbringing more fortunate by comparison,with access to material comfort,but even then,something essential was missing.
Massive online course offerings are now the watch word of the digital platform,with many from underdeveloped backgrounds getting to sit in an online classroom and adding certifications that aid in finding suitable careers. The concept ,however,is yet to take a strong hold in my native in Kerala, where many continue to labor in harsh conditions ,leading burdened lives with debt hanging over their heads.This was the missing piece of the puzzle which became apparent to me when I pursued my undergraduate studies in communication engineering from X. There was a gap between awareness and access to opportunities,particularly for young girls.When I enrolled with the Volunteer Service Organization, my first assignment was as a clinical volunteer for the pediatrics ward.I got to interact with children aged between 5-12, many of whom were suffering from childhood leukemia,cerebral palsy and accidental paralysis.One particular story of a young girl with leukemia,who wished to become an engineer herself touched my heart.Her family belonged to the below poverty line class, and as such lacked the ability to fund her medical and educational expenses.I took it upon myself to help her by contacting the Regional Cancer Centre,300 kilometres away,where subsidized medical care could be availed.It was not easy working through the bureaucratic red tape and speaking continuously with consulting oncologists and the medical director, but I was on a determined path.It became my proudest moment when this girl's mother contacted me weeks later,joyously informing me that not only was she receiving treatment,but the Teach for India movement had contacted them,guaranteeing sponsored education for the locality,having heard the story. The incident taught me the importance of shouldering and seeing through delegated responsibilities, learning to become self reliant and diligent and above all, compassion for those less fortunate.
What made me decide to pursue my postgraduate study in the field of information systems was the lack of a strong female presence in the field of information technology project management. Technical roles for women are limited to strictly software coding, conferencing and technical administration under human resources, but without equipping them with the necessary knowledge of managing business projects. The encouragement to begin, develop and lead new projects and even start technology training is very weak in India and the Middle East, because the concept of coming up with something beneficial in the digital platform is yet to take a strong hold, especially with a woman at the helm, and I intend to use the academic study undertaken to encourage more Asian and Arab women to actively participate and work in STEM firms instead of being regaled to the shadows of limited work sectors. It is a daunting and fledgling task, no doubt, but I am not one to shy away from responsibilities that I am tasked with. I envision massive improvement for Asia through mutual cooperation,establishing a diverse online presence, for any place without technology and is a place without hopes for advancement and development. I intend to underline the importance of project management certifications with plans to introduce a new corporate structure enabling all employees to receive technical and managerial training with enhanced field opportunities. With the establishment of a technical hub in my native town in Kerala, I am confident of presenting a greater net of opportunities that allow young people a chance to learn, to teach and to gain significant experience without compromising on the quality of content.
The University of X has a history of awarding scholarships to promising young students from the developing world in order to bring knowledge, skills and leadership abilities to their home communities. Previous graduates of the XYZ have gone onto represent their worth globally at mainframe computing challenges, which bears testimony to the success of the academic faculty, facilities and encouragement bestowed to students to realize their fullest potential. By becoming one such recipient of the ABC Scholarship, I wish to realize the ambition outlined in my Statement and continue the great work of volunteering alongside charting my professional goals,to meet the growing needs of a great nation. I thank you for your time and consideration for this prestigious award and pay it forward through my work, academically and professionally.
Please state in the space provided below or on a separate sheet of paper, in your own words, the reasons for this application. Some indication of your financial situation would be helpful. We would also like to know about any achievements you are proud of (academic and/or otherwise) and how you expect your studies to influence your future career. You can also mention how you feel the scholarship and studying at a UK Higher Education Institution will benefit you (and /or your community) when you return home.
As an Indian citizen, It has been my ambition to augment the positive contributions made in the ever growing software industry, with the aim to use the knowledge gained into building applications that benefit rural India, where many reside unaware of their rights to quality education which could lead to subsequent employment and sustained growth. Having been raised in the Middle East,I considered my upbringing more fortunate by comparison,with access to material comfort,but even then,something essential was missing.
Massive online course offerings are now the watch word of the digital platform,with many from underdeveloped backgrounds getting to sit in an online classroom and adding certifications that aid in finding suitable careers. The concept ,however,is yet to take a strong hold in my native in Kerala, where many continue to labor in harsh conditions ,leading burdened lives with debt hanging over their heads.This was the missing piece of the puzzle which became apparent to me when I pursued my undergraduate studies in communication engineering from X. There was a gap between awareness and access to opportunities,particularly for young girls.When I enrolled with the Volunteer Service Organization, my first assignment was as a clinical volunteer for the pediatrics ward.I got to interact with children aged between 5-12, many of whom were suffering from childhood leukemia,cerebral palsy and accidental paralysis.One particular story of a young girl with leukemia,who wished to become an engineer herself touched my heart.Her family belonged to the below poverty line class, and as such lacked the ability to fund her medical and educational expenses.I took it upon myself to help her by contacting the Regional Cancer Centre,300 kilometres away,where subsidized medical care could be availed.It was not easy working through the bureaucratic red tape and speaking continuously with consulting oncologists and the medical director, but I was on a determined path.It became my proudest moment when this girl's mother contacted me weeks later,joyously informing me that not only was she receiving treatment,but the Teach for India movement had contacted them,guaranteeing sponsored education for the locality,having heard the story. The incident taught me the importance of shouldering and seeing through delegated responsibilities, learning to become self reliant and diligent and above all, compassion for those less fortunate.
What made me decide to pursue my postgraduate study in the field of information systems was the lack of a strong female presence in the field of information technology project management. Technical roles for women are limited to strictly software coding, conferencing and technical administration under human resources, but without equipping them with the necessary knowledge of managing business projects. The encouragement to begin, develop and lead new projects and even start technology training is very weak in India and the Middle East, because the concept of coming up with something beneficial in the digital platform is yet to take a strong hold, especially with a woman at the helm, and I intend to use the academic study undertaken to encourage more Asian and Arab women to actively participate and work in STEM firms instead of being regaled to the shadows of limited work sectors. It is a daunting and fledgling task, no doubt, but I am not one to shy away from responsibilities that I am tasked with. I envision massive improvement for Asia through mutual cooperation,establishing a diverse online presence, for any place without technology and is a place without hopes for advancement and development. I intend to underline the importance of project management certifications with plans to introduce a new corporate structure enabling all employees to receive technical and managerial training with enhanced field opportunities. With the establishment of a technical hub in my native town in Kerala, I am confident of presenting a greater net of opportunities that allow young people a chance to learn, to teach and to gain significant experience without compromising on the quality of content.
The University of X has a history of awarding scholarships to promising young students from the developing world in order to bring knowledge, skills and leadership abilities to their home communities. Previous graduates of the XYZ have gone onto represent their worth globally at mainframe computing challenges, which bears testimony to the success of the academic faculty, facilities and encouragement bestowed to students to realize their fullest potential. By becoming one such recipient of the ABC Scholarship, I wish to realize the ambition outlined in my Statement and continue the great work of volunteering alongside charting my professional goals,to meet the growing needs of a great nation. I thank you for your time and consideration for this prestigious award and pay it forward through my work, academically and professionally.