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Studying mathematics - trying to get a intership and need revise



mahoganye07 1 / -  
Feb 19, 2010   #1
Studying mathematics has been the most enjoyable and rewarding part of my academic career. The logic and reasoning required for the subject keeps me interested. I am also interested in mathematics because I am very good at it. I live how mathematics gives you good thinking skills and problem solving skills. My success in mathematics has given me a strong foundation to approach a degree with both the confidence and enthusiasm needed to succeed.

I work hard and have a good level of concentration. I work efficiently always make good use of my time. Deadlines are met with work to the best of my ability which is of a high quality and is always presented clearly. I have always been able to work well independently, but I also work well with others.

I want to participate in the 2010 MSRI-UP because I want to develop the confidence to succeed in ongoing mathematical studies. I want to increase my skills when it comes to communicating mathematics. I want to improve my ability to read, understand, construct, and write proofs. I want to get acquaint with the culture and activities of research mathematics. I want to develop a skill in reading professional-level mathematics.

I would like to be a successful math teacher. My reason for choosing this career goal is because I am always helping someone in math daily. When I help people they always tell me that I would be a good math teacher. At first I did not see myself as a math teacher, but over the past semester my experiences as a math tutor has encouraged me to teach it. Another reason that I chose this career is because I have had some good math instructors. I would like to emulate them and make my students more knowledgeable about the subject.

The first step in preparing myself for my career is attending San Jacinto College. I transfer to Texas Southern University to get my bachelors degree. Later on I am going to get my masters in Mathematics. I am the first person in my family to attend college and actually get a degree and it inspires me to work harder.

remya 2 / 10  
Feb 19, 2010   #2
I live how mathematics gives you good thinking skills and problem solving skills.Felt some problem in this line ,but not clear what.i think the moderater can help you.

It is good that you managed to express your ideas in a polite manner. It would be enough.
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Feb 20, 2010   #3
This would be more impressive if you specified which degree you want:
...to approach a degree with both the confidence and enthusiasm needed to succeed.
Even if you are not certain, it is impressive to have a plan.

Your second paragraph states a lot of strengths you have, but I think it needs a TOPIC SENTENCE to establish the point being made in the paragraph.

I want to improve my ability to read, understand, construct, and write proofs. I want to get acquainted with the culture and activities of research mathematics. I want to develop a skill in reading professional-level mathematics.

your paragraph about being a math teacher is very good.

:-)


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