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Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.
I was raised in the family that supports all of the children to follow their interest to bring out their potency. This opportunity has benefited me and helped me to improve my leadership skills through volunteering in various organizations and running my own business since junior high school. I always have a desire to give back to my home country. This desire has motivate me to be a facilitator of a non-profit organization named Inspiration-factory, which is an organization with vision and mission to inspire unfortunate children to be brave in pursuing their dream.
As a true leader, I encourage and inspire people to pursue their dream. Having interest in entrepreneurship and being a coordinator of Development of YY Committee of AS Community in 2014, I initiated a seminar called CP. Accounting Student Community is a student organization with five committees that cooperate to achieve the same goal. YY is one of the organization committee that mainly focuses in planning and executing organization vision in improving interpersonal skills and developing creative and innovative thinking of accounting
students. This seminar was driven by a desire to influence the youth society to be brave in executing their ideas into reality, as in this case, if they are aspire to be an entrepreneur, I want them to be brave to start their own business. This seminar is expected to inspire young people especially students in Economy Faculty of XY and to help the government that in fact is trying to improve the number of entrepreneur in Indonesia. As a person in charge who initiated the seminar, I lead the work from zero. I improve my problem-solving skill as a leader simultaneously by initiated regular internal meetings to discuss the preparation of the seminar and to address the issues in succeeding the seminar. The biggest challenge I faced during preparation of the seminar is how to engage with my team member. To tackle this problem, I
encouraged my team to give their recommendation and analysis in order to come to a best decision and motivate them to finish their work. To increase the cooperation level, it is important for me to build a closer bond with each member. Therefore, in many occasion I tried to interact with them more often and acknowledge their presence by means trusting them in doing their task and praising them for doing a good work.
As a result, I created a good teamwork that successfully gained participation and enthusiast from many students in the seminar. We invited two speakers who are entrepreneurs that have succeed in running their own business while pursuing their study to share their experiences and initiated a business plan competition in that seminar. Furthermore, Many students gained knowledge of how to write a business plan and got inspired to start their own business.
Leadership and Influence
Chevening is looking for individuals who will be future leaders or influencers in their home countries. Explain how you meet this requirement, using clear examples of your own leadership and influencing skills to support your answer.
I was raised in the family that supports all of the children to follow their interest to bring out their potency. This opportunity has benefited me and helped me to improve my leadership skills through volunteering in various organizations and running my own business since junior high school. I always have a desire to give back to my home country. This desire has motivate me to be a facilitator of a non-profit organization named Inspiration-factory, which is an organization with vision and mission to inspire unfortunate children to be brave in pursuing their dream.
As a true leader, I encourage and inspire people to pursue their dream. Having interest in entrepreneurship and being a coordinator of Development of YY Committee of AS Community in 2014, I initiated a seminar called CP. Accounting Student Community is a student organization with five committees that cooperate to achieve the same goal. YY is one of the organization committee that mainly focuses in planning and executing organization vision in improving interpersonal skills and developing creative and innovative thinking of accounting
students. This seminar was driven by a desire to influence the youth society to be brave in executing their ideas into reality, as in this case, if they are aspire to be an entrepreneur, I want them to be brave to start their own business. This seminar is expected to inspire young people especially students in Economy Faculty of XY and to help the government that in fact is trying to improve the number of entrepreneur in Indonesia. As a person in charge who initiated the seminar, I lead the work from zero. I improve my problem-solving skill as a leader simultaneously by initiated regular internal meetings to discuss the preparation of the seminar and to address the issues in succeeding the seminar. The biggest challenge I faced during preparation of the seminar is how to engage with my team member. To tackle this problem, I
encouraged my team to give their recommendation and analysis in order to come to a best decision and motivate them to finish their work. To increase the cooperation level, it is important for me to build a closer bond with each member. Therefore, in many occasion I tried to interact with them more often and acknowledge their presence by means trusting them in doing their task and praising them for doing a good work.
As a result, I created a good teamwork that successfully gained participation and enthusiast from many students in the seminar. We invited two speakers who are entrepreneurs that have succeed in running their own business while pursuing their study to share their experiences and initiated a business plan competition in that seminar. Furthermore, Many students gained knowledge of how to write a business plan and got inspired to start their own business.
