Hello, I'm looking for feedback on my CommonApp short answer to the following prompt:
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences (150 words or fewer).
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A few months ago, my Academic Decathlon class took a practice test over the assigned novel, The Grapes of Wrath. One of the test questions concerned the ingredients of a character's sandwich. We all laughed at the question's ridiculous specificity afterwards, and it became one of many Decathlon inside jokes. But what astonished me more than the quiz's attention to detail was that as I read the book, I had chosen to memorize these ingredients - white bread, Spam, pickles, and cheese - in anticipation of a related test question. I had developed a detail-oriented mindset from poring over thick information packets about many different subjects including economics and music. I recognized that no piece of knowledge was inconsequential, that even the tiniest details were worth understanding. The end result was a sizable collection of medals, an appreciation of all academic disciplines, and a more thorough way of observing the world.
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Thanks!
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences (150 words or fewer).
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A few months ago, my Academic Decathlon class took a practice test over the assigned novel, The Grapes of Wrath. One of the test questions concerned the ingredients of a character's sandwich. We all laughed at the question's ridiculous specificity afterwards, and it became one of many Decathlon inside jokes. But what astonished me more than the quiz's attention to detail was that as I read the book, I had chosen to memorize these ingredients - white bread, Spam, pickles, and cheese - in anticipation of a related test question. I had developed a detail-oriented mindset from poring over thick information packets about many different subjects including economics and music. I recognized that no piece of knowledge was inconsequential, that even the tiniest details were worth understanding. The end result was a sizable collection of medals, an appreciation of all academic disciplines, and a more thorough way of observing the world.
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Thanks!