"accelerated dental programs" - BOSTON UNIVERSITY

I first became interested in BU when I was searching for accelerated dental programs with my Counselor. My Counselor described the university as a "diverse" place very much "suitable" for me as I am quite strongly acquainted with the element diversity in my life; being the ------ ambassador's daughter. Since then, I have been a frequent visitor to the BU website. Moreover, I have been inspired by the programs available at the university especially the 7 year liberal arts/dental program. Ironically enough, being a diplomat has deprived me of creating strong links with my Muslim heritage, therefore I was extremely enthused by the fact that BU now offers two new minors in Muslim Culture and Muslim Societies I truly look forward to embark on the beginning of a new chapter in my future at BU.

A LOT of telling in this essay.
why not talk about the activities and more than the minors at BU?
maybe talk about ENVISIONING yourself on the campus.
imagery!
--that's so cool that ur an ambassador's daughter! ^^ i'm jealous. :P

***PLEASE EDIT MY COMMON APP ESSAY!