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Topic C: Considering your lifetime goals, discuss how your current and future academic and extracurricular activities might help you achieve your goals.
Dreaming my future as an engineer who can able to change the world into better places, I've always tried to do my best in order to achieve this goal. Process to become an engineer may put me into a challenge, but I believe that preparing to face those obstacles by taking rigorous classes and involving myself in various extracurricular activities such as leadership academy can make me to overcome them, which will allow me to succeed in college and become a successful engineer.
In an academic side, I have mostly taken Pre-AP and AP classes, received a solid GPA, and maintained a high class rank throughout the high school to show myself that I can able to manage the college courses well. Taking challenging classes, such as AP Psychology, AP language, and AP physics always made me to spend more time to study for a deeper understanding, but I had a good chance to experience and prepare for the level of difficulties in college courses. Furthermore, maintaining a high GPA and my class rank in such a rigorous class gave me a confidence to prove that I'm a diligent and a hard-working student who can also succeed in college.
My love in physics and calculus allowed me to differentiate from other students. Whenever I found a new question, such as in mechanic portions of physics, my mind got fascinated and intrigued to seek a solution. The best way to unravel this curiosity was to visit my physics and calculus teacher, and this habit became a huge advantage to know my teacher personally, giving me an additional advice from them. I believe that my strong interest in these subjects will set a solid base to learn about engineering in a better and a quicker way, leading me to become a great engineer.
Leadership Academy is a prestigious organization in my school district that provides students an excellent communication and leadership skills. While I was involved in this organization, I've learn a valuable lesson, especially by providing me an opportunity to utilize leadership skills to solve a problem, that becoming a successful engineer is not all about having a vast knowledge, but it's about balancing both knowledge and leadership. Also, by conducting more community services through this organization, I was able to turn myself into a better individual who cares about people, like how aggie spirit values families and communities.
If I can become a part of the aggie family, I would be very grateful and put my perseverance to excel in college, such as studying hard and also get involved in many clubs or activities. Of course, it is going to be very challenging unlike high school, but the past activities I had built a strong belief that nothing can be overcame with my dedication and confidence. These past and future activities will become a huge stepping stone for me to achieve my dream as an engineer.
Please give me feedback so I can see the problem.
And I really appreciate your time reading my essay, thank you so much!
Topic C: Considering your lifetime goals, discuss how your current and future academic and extracurricular activities might help you achieve your goals.
Dreaming my future as an engineer who can able to change the world into better places, I've always tried to do my best in order to achieve this goal. Process to become an engineer may put me into a challenge, but I believe that preparing to face those obstacles by taking rigorous classes and involving myself in various extracurricular activities such as leadership academy can make me to overcome them, which will allow me to succeed in college and become a successful engineer.
In an academic side, I have mostly taken Pre-AP and AP classes, received a solid GPA, and maintained a high class rank throughout the high school to show myself that I can able to manage the college courses well. Taking challenging classes, such as AP Psychology, AP language, and AP physics always made me to spend more time to study for a deeper understanding, but I had a good chance to experience and prepare for the level of difficulties in college courses. Furthermore, maintaining a high GPA and my class rank in such a rigorous class gave me a confidence to prove that I'm a diligent and a hard-working student who can also succeed in college.
My love in physics and calculus allowed me to differentiate from other students. Whenever I found a new question, such as in mechanic portions of physics, my mind got fascinated and intrigued to seek a solution. The best way to unravel this curiosity was to visit my physics and calculus teacher, and this habit became a huge advantage to know my teacher personally, giving me an additional advice from them. I believe that my strong interest in these subjects will set a solid base to learn about engineering in a better and a quicker way, leading me to become a great engineer.
Leadership Academy is a prestigious organization in my school district that provides students an excellent communication and leadership skills. While I was involved in this organization, I've learn a valuable lesson, especially by providing me an opportunity to utilize leadership skills to solve a problem, that becoming a successful engineer is not all about having a vast knowledge, but it's about balancing both knowledge and leadership. Also, by conducting more community services through this organization, I was able to turn myself into a better individual who cares about people, like how aggie spirit values families and communities.
If I can become a part of the aggie family, I would be very grateful and put my perseverance to excel in college, such as studying hard and also get involved in many clubs or activities. Of course, it is going to be very challenging unlike high school, but the past activities I had built a strong belief that nothing can be overcame with my dedication and confidence. These past and future activities will become a huge stepping stone for me to achieve my dream as an engineer.
