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My Essay For Admissions [ THE ART INSTITUTE OF CHARLOTTE ]


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May 29, 2010   #1
TOPIC : WHAT ARE YOUR GOALS AND HOW DO YOU EXPECT YOUR EDUCATION AT THE Ai TO HELP YOU ATTAIN THEM? IN WHAT WAYS WILL YOU PARTICIPATE IN ORDER TO BE SUCCESSFUL?

*150 WORDS MINIMUM *

MY ESSAY :

As a child I have always had this passion for fashion and hairdressing. As a Hillside High School student, I was able to attain my Cosmetology License. Along the way I learned that I could also strive to become that; Fashion Stylist, Fashion Merchandiser & Fashion Event Planner, i've always dreamt of. It was not until the end of my sophomore year that I learned about The Art Institute, and its offers. Going to The Art Institute of Charlotte, seems to be my ticket OUT of the doors of TRAGEDY and into the doors of good fortune. Fashion is unique and creative. Fashion also allows you to gain insight of the embrace it has over your creativity and imagination.

From my understanding, after researching, I can attain a Bachelors of Arts, in Fashion Management and Marketing, within three years. After taking up all classes that are required for this career, I will be well prepared for what I enjoy doing, for a living. Buying, styling, and having the proper knowledge to become apart of the business that moves the world, fashion, The institute can help me. The environment embraces your creativity, which is wonderful because I tend to wear my uniqueness on my sleeve. The Art Institute also allows you to be open and provides a quality learning experience, from my knowledge.

The Art Institute of Charlotte is where I plan to attend to get the education that will help me launch my career in fashion field. Throughout the time I spend at the Institute I will participate in every way that I can so that my career will be a huge success. Such as Internship, Fashion Shows, Fashion Week and Assisting people around the campus with their sense of style.

Often times sacrifices tend to come in and destroy things when it is in the mixture of life. Sacrificing will not be a problem with me because, "friends" should understand that not only does education comes first but your career is at stake. I am aware that it will be important for me to surround myself in activities that is encouraging to my passion for fashion.
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May 31, 2010   #2
As a child I have always had this passion for the study o fashion and hairdressing. As a Hillside High School student, I was able to attain my Cosmetology License. Along the way I learned that I could also strive to become that Fashion Stylist, Fashion Merchandiser and Fashion Event Planner I've always dreamt of being.

It was not until the end of my sophomore year that I learned about The Art Institute, and its offers diverse set of resources and programs. Going to The Art Institute of Charlotte (no comma necessary here) seems to be my ticket OUT of the doors of TRAGEDY and into the doors of good fortune. --- you have not said anything about a tragedy. What do you mean? I think you should use this sentence to start a new paragraph and really explain what you mean about tragedy and good fortune.

No need for " " marks with friends here:
Sacrificing will not be a problem for me, because friends should understand that not only does education and career must be taken seriously.

I am aware that it will be important for me to surround myself in activities that is are encouraging to my passion for fashion.

Cool!! Keep on studying other art, too. When you understand one kind of art, you understand something about them all! fashion is a great art form to use as the basis for a career. You can earn a lot of money and accomplish great, meaningful things! I'm excited for you... Keep on reading and writing to practice. You have errors, but they are not bad errors.
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Jun 2, 2010   #3
Thank you so much ! I hope this helps !


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