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AIF For Software Engineering (More About Your Goals)


theone2020 2 / 3  
Jan 20, 2020   #1

creating a bridge



In Waterloo Engineering, I would like to start a new hackathon event that encourages collaborations between different faculties. Hack the North is perfect for students in engineering but may be intimidating for beginners. My event would introduce students to engineering and help them build new relationships.

To supplement my hackathon event, I plan to create a club that connects students with new people. It will act as a hub where students can socialize and improve their soft skills. There will also be workshops to prepare students for the hackathon.

Thus, my goal is creating a bridge between Waterloo's faculties. Along with my peers, I would like to improve my social skills and learn about different programs. Also, this concept can expand to other faculties. I want to inspire the creation of new clubs and continue supporting students even after I graduate.
Holt  Educational Consultant - / 14,835 4783  
Jan 20, 2020   #2
Without access to the actual prompt you are responding to, I cannot really tell you that you are responding to the prompt accurately. That is something that I can only assess if I have access to the question you are responding to. With that said, this seems like a good goal as a student at the university. I believe that it could be further improved if you can compare and contrast the current hacking events at Waterloo with the reasons why yours would be set apart from it. It isn't enough to simply say that the current hackathon tends to be frightening for new freshmen. The response could use further development overall. Unfortunately, I can't point out how to revise this essay because of the missing prompt requirement.


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