I need some quick advices for this essay since the due day is Friday. I am still editing the last two paragraphs, I will upload it later. But you can still give me advices on this incomplete one.
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personal statement: you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations
My hometown is Taiwan which is a small island located in the far eastern region of Asia. I live most of my time in shihlin, a prestigious district in Taipei. I have an unforgottable sensation to this region. Shihlin is well-known for its bustling night market, large natural recreation parks and profound, heartfelt neighbor relationship. The versatility of my growing backgrund have shaped my personality and inspire my life goal for future. The meaning of Shihlin in Chinese is "the Town of Schlors" which originated from that many famous schlors, poets and literatures in history were from this town. The deep, subtle influence of Shihlin culture have encouraged me to pursuit a definitive goal in my life.
I firmly believe that Taiwan is a big home to me. I am familiar with everything here, I enjoy living in this small but affluent country with abundance in culture and humanity. I consider three places as my homes. The home in Taipei is my permanent shelter, Taichung and Chiayi are homes for me to live for a short period. My dad's machine company moved to Taichung 9 years ago. My family used to visit that county during my semester breaks. Taichung has become home since my dad stays there long time for his business.
It is easy for Taiwanese to go back and forth between counties. My mom was just like any other people from countryside moved into Taipei to seek a better future. She brings a different culture to me. She teaches me the hardship of agriculture society and telles me to cherish things I own; to love people who treat me well. My dear aunt who live in Chiayi to abide by her responsibility, she takes care of my grandparents and it seems as her ultimate goal. Unfortunately, she is now suffering pain and torture from the notorious womb cancer.
She sees it as her final day is near, seems give up the hope of fighting cancer. My aunt is just like my second mom who concerns about me and takes care of me when I visit her in Chiayi. My mom one time tells me this,"you are good at inspiring people." Those light words ignite the altruism of my heart. I start to call my aunt regularly. Within minutes of brief yet long disance calls, I am not only helping her to turn more optimistic, aunt also give me a rare chance to discover myself. I use numerous methods include psychological tools to suasion my aunt's obdurate attitude. After all, I have a dream of becoming a knowledgeable professional psychologist and nutritionist.
I'll be very thankful for you help, thank you!!!
personal statement: you come from - for example, your family, community or school - and tell us how your world has shaped your dreams and aspirations
My hometown is Taiwan which is a small island located in the far eastern region of Asia. I live most of my time in shihlin, a prestigious district in Taipei. I have an unforgottable sensation to this region. Shihlin is well-known for its bustling night market, large natural recreation parks and profound, heartfelt neighbor relationship. The versatility of my growing backgrund have shaped my personality and inspire my life goal for future. The meaning of Shihlin in Chinese is "the Town of Schlors" which originated from that many famous schlors, poets and literatures in history were from this town. The deep, subtle influence of Shihlin culture have encouraged me to pursuit a definitive goal in my life.
I firmly believe that Taiwan is a big home to me. I am familiar with everything here, I enjoy living in this small but affluent country with abundance in culture and humanity. I consider three places as my homes. The home in Taipei is my permanent shelter, Taichung and Chiayi are homes for me to live for a short period. My dad's machine company moved to Taichung 9 years ago. My family used to visit that county during my semester breaks. Taichung has become home since my dad stays there long time for his business.
It is easy for Taiwanese to go back and forth between counties. My mom was just like any other people from countryside moved into Taipei to seek a better future. She brings a different culture to me. She teaches me the hardship of agriculture society and telles me to cherish things I own; to love people who treat me well. My dear aunt who live in Chiayi to abide by her responsibility, she takes care of my grandparents and it seems as her ultimate goal. Unfortunately, she is now suffering pain and torture from the notorious womb cancer.
She sees it as her final day is near, seems give up the hope of fighting cancer. My aunt is just like my second mom who concerns about me and takes care of me when I visit her in Chiayi. My mom one time tells me this,"you are good at inspiring people." Those light words ignite the altruism of my heart. I start to call my aunt regularly. Within minutes of brief yet long disance calls, I am not only helping her to turn more optimistic, aunt also give me a rare chance to discover myself. I use numerous methods include psychological tools to suasion my aunt's obdurate attitude. After all, I have a dream of becoming a knowledgeable professional psychologist and nutritionist.
