Why I applied to Molloy - I need some help with my admission essay

the topic is What factor more than any other caused you to apply to Molloy?

so far I came up with this

For as long as I can remember, I've always wanted to become a psychologist. However, working closely with nurses in a pediatricians office has given me the desire to pursue a career in nursing. With that in mind I began searching for a school that would prepare me for a rewarding and promising career as a nurse. I have chosen to apply to Molloy because of the exceptional nursing program, noted for being the fourth largest in the nation.

any other suggestions

Good afternoon.

I would discuss the specific aspects of Molloy that drew you to it. What is it specifically about this institution that made you decide that this was the perfect place for you? The prompt wants to know what motivated you to choose them, so focus on that and not so much historical background.

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Gloria
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