Hello, so currently I am applying to UBC and in the application form, it requires me to write an essay about my self. So the question is:
Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you? If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (maximum 250 words)
Everybody has a passion, during my high school years I always try to find my own. Back to the orientation day in high school, there was an event where all of the extracurricular had a chance to show what they could do. Everybody seemed to enjoy what they were doing, and they did it joyfully. At that moment I realized that doing what we love is an essential thing for people to consider regarding their life. From all of the performances, the dance club is the one that intrigued me the most. So I gave it a try and joined the club. Joining the club helped me discovered my passion for art. The process of finding it was not an easy journey. There were a lot of tasks that I had to accomplish that I found it very difficult at that time, but because I was aware of what I want so I pushed off all the pressure and worked harder. I felt some positive changes in myself from then; I became more optimistic and aware of hardworking. Not just striving for myself, I also had to work with my team. I had been working with them for almost three years. They trust my positivity and competence to work with theirs, and it brings out some best results to our team. I have achieved up to 30 awards with them. Moreover, I could also balance my academic terms. I steadily keep my scores in the top ten of the class.
I am from Indonesia, and I did not use English as the first language so please help me by commenting/editing my essay
Thank you :)
Tell us about who you are. How would your family, friends, and/or members of your community describe you? If possible, please include something about yourself that you are most proud of and why. (maximum 250 words)
self introduction essay for ubc
Everybody has a passion, during my high school years I always try to find my own. Back to the orientation day in high school, there was an event where all of the extracurricular had a chance to show what they could do. Everybody seemed to enjoy what they were doing, and they did it joyfully. At that moment I realized that doing what we love is an essential thing for people to consider regarding their life. From all of the performances, the dance club is the one that intrigued me the most. So I gave it a try and joined the club. Joining the club helped me discovered my passion for art. The process of finding it was not an easy journey. There were a lot of tasks that I had to accomplish that I found it very difficult at that time, but because I was aware of what I want so I pushed off all the pressure and worked harder. I felt some positive changes in myself from then; I became more optimistic and aware of hardworking. Not just striving for myself, I also had to work with my team. I had been working with them for almost three years. They trust my positivity and competence to work with theirs, and it brings out some best results to our team. I have achieved up to 30 awards with them. Moreover, I could also balance my academic terms. I steadily keep my scores in the top ten of the class.
I am from Indonesia, and I did not use English as the first language so please help me by commenting/editing my essay
Thank you :)