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Artist, artwork and design - What makes you a perfect candidate for FIT?



dvegaortiz 3 / 4  
Jan 1, 2011   #1
due within the hour! would love feedback and editing

As a person and artist I have many contributions to offer FIT. Not only do I have many things to offer but I also believe in what FIT has to offer me. I am a determined individual that can take the skills I learn and manifest it something greater. With the help of FIT I believe I can become a successful interior designer.

I am very comfortable at FIT, I have participated in the summer and Saturday programs. I can say at FIT my skills have improved and it shows in my artwork. At FIT I know that they strive for the best and creative, I can offer that. Being passionate about art, I work hard on what I do and don't stop until I've reached my goal. I only go for the best. As a student at the High School for Arts & Business, my artworks have been displayed at the school's art shows and in the school halls. I have worked with different types of medium and many art projects. My creativity is shown in my artwork and who I am. Not only can I offer my art skills or creativity to FIT, I am also a very hardworking student. I am always on time with my assignments and try to get the highest grade I can. Getting an education is very important to me and schoolwork is a top priority. Working at a pizzeria/restaurant I have gained a few skills and being able to communicate with others on what they want is one of them. I am good with listening and taking directions. As a person I am giving and caring. I love to offer a hand when needed and participate in volunteer work also. I've done a few creative volunteer works such as making puppets to put on a thanksgiving play and making corsets for a senior prom. I plan on to continue volunteering after high school and bring it to the campus. I can contribute my creativity, determination, motivation and skills. At FIT I know my skills will excel there and will help me grow as a person. I can say I would gladly be part of that.

I've always been interested in designing rooms. It gives me great pleasure to rearrange a room or create one in my vision. Everyday I am in a room and can see what I would like to change about it or focus on more. I think a room or place represents a lot about a person. It gives off what the person is interested in; things such as what colors they like or their personality. It makes a person comfortable in where they are and enjoy being there. I am interested in interior design because its something I can see myself doing and love doing it. It also will provide satisfaction to clients and myself to have their dream room designed before their eyes. I am able to communicate with people on what they want and provide them with that. I may not be as skilled right now but I know with my determination and help at FIT I can be a successful interior designer.

swoosh18 4 / 31  
Jan 1, 2011   #2
try using "FIT" a little less in the first and second paragraphs. Maybe change it up sometimes and us "Fashion Institute of Technology"


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