'the audience was in shock' - extracurricular activity or work experiences

The first day I opened my mouth to perform a solo , the audience was in shock, others in tears. To have the ability to emotionaly touch lives and bring joy to others through music is phenomenal. Music is my passion, something I've always enjoyed. Starting the piano at age seven, and singing since age three, music has played a major role in my life. As a pianist, songwriter, and peformer I've learned the rewards of strick discipline.It has taught me how great accomplishments can be acheived through hard work and dedication. My routine consists of practicing daily, and studying interpretations of numerous piano compositions. I've subsequently performed solo's and piano compositions at concerts, talent shows,special events such as weddings, and even church. I'm also involved in District Honor Choir, American Choral Directors Association, and also my high school choir.

Add more of how singing and music effects you as a person, not just others. Also add a good closing to tie everything together.

I agree with rvonitter, although in a few sentences you've summed up your accomplishments and achievements through music very well. If you amp up the word choice and personalize the tone a bit more it will be perfect.

Overall Good Job! Your into is grand!

All the best!
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