'I did Bachelor in Arts in Pakistan' - admission in fashion design course

My name is Ayesha Rasool. I am from Pakistan. I did Bachelor of Arts from Pakistan. I applied for admission in BA(Hon) in Fashion Design and Marketing. I need to write personal statement for this course but i dont know what I write and how to write. I need help to write personal statement. At the moment i write this statement but i need help to improve my statement. Please guide me to write effective and good statement please.

My name is Ayesha Rasool. I did Bachelor in Arts from Pakistan. I want to get admission in Undergraduate course in Fashion Design. From the childhood I always had interested in fashion. I design many dresses for various vocation in Pakistan especially for wedding and Eid. I always have dream to become one of the best designer of the world. I am interested to get admission in UK because it will widen my knowledge according to international standard and it will help me to introduced my knowledge and my experience according to world standard. This course is challenge for me and I am a girl who always accept challenge and whatever matter I always achieved my target. I can see myself to be one of the best fashion designer after 4 5 years.

Thanks

Since my childhood I was interested in dresses and stiching while led to my interest is fashion. [ You cant be interested in fashion since childhood. ] .

Your essay is too short. Get some sampled from the essayforum which will help you.

To write a personal statement you need to focus on connecting all the dots...for example you must be able to convince the admissions committee about your long term goals and why do you want to take their program...also do mention you 5 year goals so that you can convince them of your seriousness as an applicant...you can read a post on personal statement writing here for detailed information... brightlinkprep.com/blog/how-to-write-a-personal-statement/

Good advice from jazihzahir...
Also, your personal statement is the first impression you are forming about yourself to the admission committee... They need to remember you out of many applicants to allocate a place for you in the uni. So, it should stand out the others. For this you need present it more creatively. Take one of your own experiences. Expand it to show them who you are, how your passion for your intended field began to develop and as jazibzahir suggested tell them your long term goals. Dont just make a list of things. Present it creatively!