Hi people. this will be my very first post here. I kept deleting and rewriting the short answer over and over again then i decided not to change it
and try to finish it
This is what i came up with.
Please feel free to criticize!
Making the buzzer beater, draining the 3-Point jumper. Basketball is the passion i have inside.
I joined the school's team as a freshman but i was cut off when i was a tenth grader. This event was the main source of my motivation for practicing.
I used to play basketball with my friends in sports centre then. Discussing about who is the best almost every single night.
It was a competition going on among us and i accepted the challenge. This was the second reason that pushed me to work harder. I practiced
harder and harder to prove myself to my friends and to coach. Many nights of hanging out with friends and watching movies at home were sacrificed.
Next year when i made it in the school's team again. It taught me that if you set
goals and work hard to achieve them, the hard work can pay off.
and try to finish it
This is what i came up with.
Please feel free to criticize!
Making the buzzer beater, draining the 3-Point jumper. Basketball is the passion i have inside.
I joined the school's team as a freshman but i was cut off when i was a tenth grader. This event was the main source of my motivation for practicing.
I used to play basketball with my friends in sports centre then. Discussing about who is the best almost every single night.
It was a competition going on among us and i accepted the challenge. This was the second reason that pushed me to work harder. I practiced
harder and harder to prove myself to my friends and to coach. Many nights of hanging out with friends and watching movies at home were sacrificed.
Next year when i made it in the school's team again. It taught me that if you set
goals and work hard to achieve them, the hard work can pay off.
