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'who I befriend' - First Impressions - FSU Essay (Vires, Artes, Mores)



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Oct 5, 2010   #1
The Latin words, "Vires, Artes, Mores" have been the guiding philosophy behind Florida State University. Vires signifies strength of all kinds - moral, physical, and intellectual; Artes alludes to the beauty of intellectual pursuits as exemplified in skill, craft, or art; and Mores refers to character, custom, or tradition. Describe how one or more of the values embodied in these concepts are reflected in your life.

When I first meet someone and discern whether I like them or not I take various characteristics of their personality and overall effect on me. The traits I search for often have similarities to the various strengths Vires signifies. Their moral strength is determined by how they convey their thoughts and the topic of the conversation. Personally, I believe that a person's physical strength can't characterize them, rather it is the way they use their physical strength to attract people to them that I observe. Lastly, their intellectual strength is one of the most important traits of all. The ability to carry on a conversation and keep a good mood is a skill that grows with intelligence. As my mom used to say "Dime con quiïn andas y te dirï quiïn eres" which means "tell me who your friends are and I will tell you who you are."

Moral strength can be determined in seconds after starting a conversation with an individual. Whether they talk about the news or the weather their tone of voice will convey their true feelings. I believe that to truly have a good amount of moral strength one must speak and act accordingly. For example, speaking in a warm tone and helping others whenever possible is a good display of moral strength. I can recognize and aid people and strengthen myself in the process. Never is choosing the just and responsible action detrimental. There is always enough time in my life to lend my strength.

When determining a person from afar one might take the other's actions into consideration. If one has the strength then they are obligated to help the weak. That, I believe, is the responsibility of those who have strength. Physical strength can create quite an illusion of true strength. Though it is the way that strength used which makes it signify Vires. My physical strength is often dedicated to those in need. If someone was to be carrying a heavy burden I would offer my support. Crude strength often beat true strength though in the end true strength, signified by Vires, holds steadfast.

Intellectual strength is shown in one's ability to speak and create feeling. To keep another's interest is a skill learned by observing how one interacts and adapting to it so as not to create any unpleasant feelings or awkwardness. Having the intellectual strength to collaborate well with all individuals is tremendous. I often refrain from making a sound judgment on another till after they have had a chance to express themselves.

One can be determined by what he/she does and his/her reason for doing so. Having the ability to decide whether or not to associate myself with those who also share my strength is Vires. All my actions, thoughts, and skills are reflected in who I befriend and myself personally. My moral, physical and intellectual strength is similar to those I befriend and exemplary of what is signified by Vires.

Uliquiorraxxx - / 2  
Oct 5, 2010   #2
For some reason I've been seeing quite the amount of essays for FSU. Anyway:
I suggest reading over it a bit. The essay is fine but make sure you express "Vires" (whatever the heck that is) as best as you can.

good luck getting in~ :D
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Oct 8, 2010   #3
I'll add some commas to this:

As my mom used to say, "Dime con quién andas y te diré quién eres," which means "Tell me who your friends are and I will tell you who you are."

Moral strength can be determined in seconds after starting a conversation with an individual. Whether they talk about the news or the weather their tone of voice will convey their true feelings. I believe that to truly have a good amount of moral strength one must speak and act accordingly. For example, speaking in a warm tone and helping others whenever possible is a good display of moral strength. --- I think it's better without that extra sentence in the middle (which I crossed out). But also... is it true that tone of voice can reflect moral strength? I think someone can have moral strength even if their tone reflects fear or unease.

Crude strength often beats true strength in the moment, though in the end true strength, signified by Vires, holds steadfast.

:-)


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