I believe that Pharmacy is a science and art; Personal statement(Clinical Pharmacy)

I believe that Pharmacy is a science and art. The diversity of clinical practice science and pharmacy services regulation art. The mission of pharmacist is collaborat with health care professionals to provide effective and efficient patient care.

After my graduation in 2000 from pharmacy college in King Saud university. I complete my internship in king Faisal specialist hospital in Riyadh. in December 2000, I joined king Abdul-Aziz medical city the biggest medical city in western region which is include tertiary hospital and oncology center , during my 11 years of experience I consider my self lucky cause I have early chance to work in all pharmacy departments and. given the opportunity of practicing clinical pharmacy under supervision of our clinical pharmacist .i have excellent experience in therapeutic use of medication in all specialties, disease treatment guidelines, I also work in drug information center for three years,

In 2009 I completed my master in healthcare services and hospital administration in university. My study in master during weekend for 2 years.
i Believe that subjects that I have allowed me to pick up avarity of key skills to understand health care systems and great knowledge in Management, finance, marketing, quality , leadership , insurance, ethics, etc

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I have passion for football and tennis , I enjoy going to gym regularly , I have excellent social life with my family and friends , I like music and movies , travelling.

I believe that I have the qualities to be a good master student . I am creative person . and my qualification and communication skills are good . I like to expressing ideas and concepts both in oral and written form . I hope you will take afavourable decision regarding my admission to ? program and I am looking forward to joinng your college

I believe Graduation with master degree in clinical pharmacy It is my gate that explore my carrier to become compotent and innovative clinician , researcher , educator , adminesterative, and leader in health care services , to improve health services nationally and internationally

I think the message you are trying to convey is clear, however i suggest you get you essay revised and peer reviewed more than once. So, consider this your first draft, get it reviewed and then get it fixed and get it reviewed again. you have quite a few grammar mistakes. :)

Your Ps presented good point but less details. You have to make your essay as persuasive as possible. You got to show how good you are instead of telling directly.

I expect your revision, good luck:)

this is sounding a lot like a resume, i mean its a really good list of ideas but it sounds like a list. Also, a lot of your sentences begin with "I...". I think it would be a good idea to vary it a bit. good luck!!