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Big cities are where you can see many people, cars, hospitals etc - there are many good universities



essaywriter123 1 / 1  
Jan 7, 2015   #1
Big cities are where you can see many people,cars,hospital etc. Nowadays more and more people want to live in a big city.Because it has many advantages.İn a big city people have can best study work chance and better lifestyle.

First of all there are many good University in a big city.There you can improve yourself personality,skills.They have good teacher.They can help to you for your job life.Moreover when you graduate you also find good job. Because big cities has big companies and a lot of job opportunities.Therefore many graduated students choose big cities for great work and life conditions.

The second one better lifestyle.Big cities has too much hospital,park and malls.People can go better hospital and take better nursing.More people love shopping.They can go big malls and do shopping.For example, İstanbul has to much mall and people go to malls for shopping but Gebze hasn't malls and people come İstanbul for shopping. This is big chance for big cities.

Shortly living big cities has many advantages.A few of them good jobs, good living conditions.İf you want earning good money and better lifetyle you should live in big cities.

DharrisGBC 2 / 4  
Jan 7, 2015   #2
Essaywriter123, there were many grammatical errors in your essay. I am assuming that you aren't a native English speaker so I switched up some of your sentences to make them sound better, they are just suggestions. You need two spaces after every period! The green highlighted part was a little unorganized and I think you need to think more about what you want to say...just a start. Good luck!


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