Hi can anyone please review my Amherst supp. I am supposed to reply to this quote:
"Creating an environment that allows students to build lasting friendships, including those that cut across seemingly entrenched societal and political boundaries... requires candor about the inevitable tensions, as well as about the wonderful opportunities, that diversity and inclusiveness create"
here is my essay:
Three years ago, I was selected along with 29 other teenagers from all over Tunisia to go on an exchange year in the US. Thanks to this program, I've spent the best times of my life and developed whole new aspects of myself.
This program was founded after the terrorist attacks of 9/11. It allows students from countries with significant Muslim populations to travel to the United States to tell as many people, including their host families, as they can about their cultures. We were the 10th class of an ongoing process to build lifetime relationships that "cut across seemingly entrenched societal and political boundaries." Thanks to this program, i now have a second family with whom I developed a strong bond based on honesty and acceptance. We were more than just polite to each other, we were comfortable speaking our minds about the simplest things like preferences and values. This exchange of cultural differences only drew closer.
Being tolerant and ready to face differences between one another is what made this program successful and so dear to my heart. With every student meeting his host family, making them a dish from his home country or joining the house chores schedule we were slowly contributing into making the world a little more tolerant. Both sides of the exchange experience get a hands-on experience on what it is like to love and respect the other regardless of the stereotypes associated with him. It is putting aside all expectations and being open for whatever it is that is coming your way and, most of the time, the result is the birth of an unprecedented lifetime bond.
"Creating an environment that allows students to build lasting friendships, including those that cut across seemingly entrenched societal and political boundaries... requires candor about the inevitable tensions, as well as about the wonderful opportunities, that diversity and inclusiveness create"
The birth of an unprecedented lifetime bond.
here is my essay:
Three years ago, I was selected along with 29 other teenagers from all over Tunisia to go on an exchange year in the US. Thanks to this program, I've spent the best times of my life and developed whole new aspects of myself.
This program was founded after the terrorist attacks of 9/11. It allows students from countries with significant Muslim populations to travel to the United States to tell as many people, including their host families, as they can about their cultures. We were the 10th class of an ongoing process to build lifetime relationships that "cut across seemingly entrenched societal and political boundaries." Thanks to this program, i now have a second family with whom I developed a strong bond based on honesty and acceptance. We were more than just polite to each other, we were comfortable speaking our minds about the simplest things like preferences and values. This exchange of cultural differences only drew closer.
Being tolerant and ready to face differences between one another is what made this program successful and so dear to my heart. With every student meeting his host family, making them a dish from his home country or joining the house chores schedule we were slowly contributing into making the world a little more tolerant. Both sides of the exchange experience get a hands-on experience on what it is like to love and respect the other regardless of the stereotypes associated with him. It is putting aside all expectations and being open for whatever it is that is coming your way and, most of the time, the result is the birth of an unprecedented lifetime bond.