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this is a personal statement
Coming from a big city, living with a big family, and having big dreams sometimes might be difficult to put hand in hand. One out of the six siblings is an astonishing and extraordinary person that changed my whole perception of life and science. That is my older sister, Ashwag, 23 years old, and born autistic. The love and fascination of science and medicine started out with her. I love being around her because she never fails to amaze me due to her cleverness. Living with autism might be a difficult task but it is so rewarding. I feel like I have become a better person because of her. She taught me patience, kindness and mercy. She was born autistic and verbal until she was 5 years old. She stopped talking and communicating completely after that. Autism does not run down from generation to generation because autism does not occur genetically. From the lack of communication she had, she turned towards aggression to express what she wanted and her feelings. My sister went through a lot in her life; she has Obsessive compulsive disorder, Bipolar disorder, and goes through seizure episodes once a while. I volunteer helping my parents with my sister by taking her to her doctor appointments; give her her daily medications and taking care of her when my parents need a break. Autism is one out of many mysterious illnesses that does not have direct answers to why it occurs and I want to make that change one day. One of my many dreams is to explore and conducted research about Autism. I want to help people who are diagnosed with autism and their families because they both face difficulties in their journeys. When families and friends have direct answers to why autism occurs, it might comfort them psychologically. Maybe one day I'll find the answer to why Autism occurs. Science is a very important aspect of my life and I am the type of person who likes to explore and learn different information. I think this program will give me a great opportunity to understand what will be accepted of me when attending medical school.
Thank you
this is a personal statement
Coming from a big city, living with a big family, and having big dreams sometimes might be difficult to put hand in hand. One out of the six siblings is an astonishing and extraordinary person that changed my whole perception of life and science. That is my older sister, Ashwag, 23 years old, and born autistic. The love and fascination of science and medicine started out with her. I love being around her because she never fails to amaze me due to her cleverness. Living with autism might be a difficult task but it is so rewarding. I feel like I have become a better person because of her. She taught me patience, kindness and mercy. She was born autistic and verbal until she was 5 years old. She stopped talking and communicating completely after that. Autism does not run down from generation to generation because autism does not occur genetically. From the lack of communication she had, she turned towards aggression to express what she wanted and her feelings. My sister went through a lot in her life; she has Obsessive compulsive disorder, Bipolar disorder, and goes through seizure episodes once a while. I volunteer helping my parents with my sister by taking her to her doctor appointments; give her her daily medications and taking care of her when my parents need a break. Autism is one out of many mysterious illnesses that does not have direct answers to why it occurs and I want to make that change one day. One of my many dreams is to explore and conducted research about Autism. I want to help people who are diagnosed with autism and their families because they both face difficulties in their journeys. When families and friends have direct answers to why autism occurs, it might comfort them psychologically. Maybe one day I'll find the answer to why Autism occurs. Science is a very important aspect of my life and I am the type of person who likes to explore and learn different information. I think this program will give me a great opportunity to understand what will be accepted of me when attending medical school.
Thank you
