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'Born to perform' - UMBC 300 word essay: what is your something?


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Sep 18, 2011   #1
According to Henry David Thoreau, "One is not born into the world to do everything, but to do something." What is your something?

On January 11th, 1994 in Iwakuni- shi, Japan, I was born into this world a withdrawn, but curious individual. Not but until three years prior current time, I acquired not one, but five talents that define me as a person. I convey my feelings to the masses through several art forms: modeling, music composition and lyric production, dance and thespianism.

Through dance, music and lyrical composition and production, I've learned to sort out my thoughts clearly and effectively in ways not only appealing psychologically, but in a way that helps others get in touch with their own personal emotions. By breaking into the Modeling and Acting Industry, I've acquired confidence, charisma and a certain glow that turns heads when I enter a room and now, people look up to me for it! Without a fatherly figure in my life, I have become a model masculine figure to other young men with ambitions just like mine and the feeling you get when other people think so high of you is heart warming. I do all of this on a stage where, surprisingly, I'm most comfortable. Home is where the heart is and my heart forever belongs to the limelight. I have a deep passion to perform.

250 Original Songs, 10 performances, and over 25 dance and marching band competitions later, I'm still pushing foward. I continue to write, compose, produce, dance, act and express my thoughts and feelings about the world around me, nor will I ever stop. I seek to perfect my trade. Though, I am multi-talented, I wasn't born to do everything. But I was born in this world simply to do one thing: perform!

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Sep 18, 2011   #2
Home is where the heart is and my heart forever belongs to the limelight. I have a deep passion to perform. thats really good

over all a really good essay
You might want to change or rephrase the first sentence sounds a little awkward.


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