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My Brandeis experience; Supplement essay : Why Brandeis?



yuukinguyen 1 / 1  
Feb 17, 2014   #1
Why do you want to attend Brandeis? (250 words or fewer)

Being greatly inspired by my grandparents, I have been drawn into Chemistry since my early days. On my path to be a pharmacist, Brandeis will be a perfect place for me to pursue my Biochemistry studies as well as shape my perspective for life.

My Brandeis experience will begin as I engage in lectures at the Schwartz Hall or spend hours to digest the textbooks in the library. With Brandeis's student-faculty ratio of 9:1, highly knowledgable and intimate professors, and ambitious schoolfellows, I will find no difficulties accomplish the work to the best of my ability. I can also see my opportunity as a research assistant to work on various worthwhile independent investigations. Outside of the classroom, I can spend some times on community services such as tutoring, which I have experienced firsthand in my community college since 2013. On the weekends, in my fantasies, I will run in the sun, surrounded by other Wizengamot members, and shoot a perfect throw of the Quidditch ball into the rival team's goal hoop. Moreover, the number of internships in this college never fails to impress me. Located by Boston and Cambridge, Brandeis increases the chance for me to receive more internships as well as volunteering opportunities.

At Brandeis, the place where there are no limits to my possibilities, my abilities will bloom and grow. Not only my outlook on the world will be broaden, what I learn in this college will always be on my way to become a successful pharmacist.

sandipsinh 37 / 88  
Feb 17, 2014   #2
Reason - why are you inspired by your grand parents?
pacers7ind 11 / 25  
Feb 17, 2014   #3
1. what bout your grandparents in the larger scheme
2. Mention something that makes you UNIQUE when describing Brandies. For example, anything about its geography, anything close to it that relates to law?

Its really solid, just further strengthen the reasons on why its a good choice for you.

I will correct your last paragraph
At Brandeis, the place where there are no limits to my possibilities, my abilities will bloom and growthrough its various... . Not only my outlook on the world will be broaden, what I learn in this college will always be on my way to become a successful pharmacist. How will you being a successful pharmacist apply to the broader world?
OP yuukinguyen 1 / 1  
Feb 18, 2014   #4
Thank you guys, I appreciate that!


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