Hi everyone, thank you for taking time to read my supplement for Brandeis University.
The question is: Would you rather be raised by dinosaurs, aliens or robots? Why?
I chose aliens.
I just need some editing on the supplement, and maybe some ideas too?
Thank you very much!!!
The clock hits 6:15 am, I jump out of my bed, conduct my daily morning routine, and yell, "Dad, it's time to go!!" I go through my regular school day and afterwards I engage in after school activities, come straight home, work on homework, eat with my relatives and family, and then go to bed. The idea of being raised my aliens is so appealing in this predictable life I have sometimes. I want to be able to wake up in the morning and instead of rushing off to school, I can do something else, whether it be invent something or conduct all kinds of experiments, or fly around in a huge, complex space shuttle! Aliens are the independent and have a complex mind of their own. They were not made by humans like robots, and they are not solely driven by instinct like dinosaurs. Aliens have also been able to advance themselves personally, unlike robots who are advanced by humans, and dinosaurs who died out. Aliens have been able to deal with all the trouble Earth has caused them. There are hundreds of people who are against aliens, and are doing everything to stop them, yet they continue to advance despite these troubles. And aliens live in space/galaxy! They are exposed to other parts of the universe that I could only dream of. They are able to deal with different gasses, planets, and maybe other life forms. Robots and dinosaurs were only on Earth, and they aren't able to experience these different things that occur in space.
The question is: Would you rather be raised by dinosaurs, aliens or robots? Why?
I chose aliens.
I just need some editing on the supplement, and maybe some ideas too?
Thank you very much!!!
The clock hits 6:15 am, I jump out of my bed, conduct my daily morning routine, and yell, "Dad, it's time to go!!" I go through my regular school day and afterwards I engage in after school activities, come straight home, work on homework, eat with my relatives and family, and then go to bed. The idea of being raised my aliens is so appealing in this predictable life I have sometimes. I want to be able to wake up in the morning and instead of rushing off to school, I can do something else, whether it be invent something or conduct all kinds of experiments, or fly around in a huge, complex space shuttle! Aliens are the independent and have a complex mind of their own. They were not made by humans like robots, and they are not solely driven by instinct like dinosaurs. Aliens have also been able to advance themselves personally, unlike robots who are advanced by humans, and dinosaurs who died out. Aliens have been able to deal with all the trouble Earth has caused them. There are hundreds of people who are against aliens, and are doing everything to stop them, yet they continue to advance despite these troubles. And aliens live in space/galaxy! They are exposed to other parts of the universe that I could only dream of. They are able to deal with different gasses, planets, and maybe other life forms. Robots and dinosaurs were only on Earth, and they aren't able to experience these different things that occur in space.