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Broaden my perspectives; UGRAD Exchange Program/ Why participate?



Shifu123 2 / 5  
Jan 4, 2013   #1
Please describe why you would like to study in the US. What past experiences have given you this motivation?
How will studying on the Global UGRAD program help you learn about America? How will learning about the U.S. influence your
personal and professional goals for the future? essay souldn't exceed 1000words.
Guys if it's possible try to give some comments about structure and appropriate grammar use (if there are mistakes) feel free to comment.

As the time passes everyone has to face with making one of the most important decisions, namely deciding what he or she wants to do in their lives. Last year i had the same hardship... Throughout my life I have been interested in communicating with people, sharing the knowledge and introducing new, innovative ideas to the society. Thus I think I have found myself in the sphere of management. In forming my decision one of the essential roles was played by my father who used to say "Be that as it may, the language can open new horizons for you, and you deserve it! try hard and take it!"

I have always known that the USA is considered as the birthplace of this profession, so I understand that the best way to improve my skills is to study in the US university under highly qualified professors, masters of their subjects. I, of course, also understand that it will not be easy, however in order to achieve my dream I am ready to study diligently and grasp the knowledge they give.

I hope that participating in UGRAD exchange program will be able to find my strong sides in intelectual way and even in my personality and throughout 1 year of studying I would be pointed on my weak sides and helped to overcome the deficiences, as well as, improve myself for the greater good further. As far as I am concerned the chances like this, are given only to those who have shown excellent achievements in various spheres such as, educational background, communication skills, emotional persistence and life experience. One of the main aspects of being a scholar, in my personal view, is, undoubtedly, - having an excellent academic standing, showing perfection and fine leadership skills in order to become a role model for others. It is undeniable that being an exchange student has lots of benefits, but I think that we should not forget about the great responsibility that lays on our shoulders after being chosen. I mean, if we are given this chance to study in foreing university for 1 year, it means that somebody believed in us, and we have no right for a mistake. In addition we must understand that it is a rare opportunity, and once we acquired it, we should get most of this chance not only to become a better person, but also to make the community in which we live, a little bit better. I am not claiming that I am the person who will change the bad situations in poor regions of Asia and I will help the mankind to become more wealthy, all I am trying to say I that if every person try to think of others at least a bit, then with the strength of unity we could solve a lot more problems than one perfect person would be able to solve.

You may ask why I added the last sentence in the previous paragraph. My point is deeper that it may appear, I would like to say that I believe cultural exchange provided by UGRAD program can unite our countries into one strong union and after studying in the US uni I, of course, will shae the ideas and knowledge obtained there with my collegues and classmates. Furthermore, it is important to note that in my opinion young generation can become strong cunductor to the age when selfishness and inequality do not exist.

In conclusion, I would like to say that I do believe that every person has its own destiny, and if so - I will do everything possible and impossible in order to achieve my goals, because I am really interested in this sphere and would like to continue gaining knowledge through the UGRA program.

moon05 13 / 132  
Jan 4, 2013   #2
As the time passes everyone has to face with making one of the most important decisions, namely deciding what he or she wants to do in their lives.

As time passes everyone has to make one of the most important decisions ever, what he or she wants to do in their lives.

Last year I had the same hardship...

Did you intentionally gave those dots? You should not do that in the final version.

Throughout my life I have been interested in communicating with people, sharing the knowledge and introducing new, innovative ideas to the society.

"Be that as it may, the language can open new horizons for you, and you deserve it! T ry hard and take it!"

I have always known that the USA is considered as the birthplace of this profession, so I understand that the best way to improve my skills is to study in the US university under highly qualified professors, masters of their subjects.

you have to say A university not the university

I hope that participating in UGRAD exchange program, I will be able to find my strong

As far as I am concerned the chances like this, are given only to those who have shown excellent achievements in various spheres such as, educational background, communication skills, emotional persistence and life experience.

Do not useSPHERESagain. Instead you can go withFIELDS

I mean, if we are given this chance to study in a foreign university for 1 year, it means that somebody believed in us, and we have no right for a mistake.

In addition we must understand that as it is a rare opportunity, and once we acquired it, we should get the most out of this option not only to become a better person, but also to make the community in which we live, a little bit better.

will change all the badterrible circumstancessituations in the poor regions of Asia and I will help the mankind to become more wealthy, all I am trying to say I that if every person tries to think of others at least a bit, then with the strength of unity we could solve a lot more problems than one perfect person would be able to solve.

one strong union and after studying in thea US uni I

you do not write uni as a short form of University in a formal essay!

of course, will shar e the ideas and knowledge obtained there with my collea gues and classmates.

Furthermore, it is important to note that in my opinion young generation can become strong co nductor to the age when selfishness and inequality does not exist.

Which age are you talking about? Are you talking about this era?

I would like to say that I do believe that every person has its own destiny,

their

because I am really interested in this sphere and would like to continue gaining knowledge through the UGRA program.

Again the sphere word.. Change it.. And with knowledge add experience .

By the way I am from Asia too and this exchange program you talking about, is this NESA or SUSI?
OP Shifu123 2 / 5  
Jan 4, 2013   #3
Hmm Thank u very much moon05, didn't expect so many mistakes =( still, I am very gratefull to u, one more question do u have any comments about the content and structure? is it ok ?
moon05 13 / 132  
Jan 4, 2013   #4
Everything was okay..
In case if you didn't know after every para use a double space.
I meant like this:
1st para

2nd para

And try to concentrate on the experience thing that's all
Oh if you found my info helpful, would you mind giving me a LIKE!!! :D
dumi 1 / 6793  
Jan 5, 2013   #5
As the time passes everyone has to face with making one of the most important decisions, namely deciding what he or she wants to do in their lives.

.... I wish if you said this differently;
At some point in life, everybody has to make important decisions, especially with regard to what we want to do in our lives.

Throughout my life I have been interested in communicating with people, sharing the knowledge and introducing new, innovative ideas to the society.

I have always been an extrovert who love to be with people, share knowledge with them and contribute to the society with innovative ideas.
OP Shifu123 2 / 5  
Jan 5, 2013   #6
Thnx very much) I appreciate ur help. but I think "an extrovert who loves to be with people..."


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