Carleton is powered my wind turbines. What empowers you? supplement essay

Carleton is powered my wind turbines. What empowers you?

"Smile, an everlasting smile
A smile can bring you near to me"

It brightens up, for cheering me when I'm sad. It sings with me when I'm ecstatic. It accompanies in my daily work load, and it is the most potent magic wand I possess. It is my smile. I'm powered by a simple bright smile. Starting my day by looking at the mirror with a wide rabbit teeth smile, is what empowers me throughout the day. Remarkably, I begin to feel further love and support in all areas of my life as it signifies positive attitude, happiness and agreement. Even a smile from the other end infuses me with a certain level of confidence and added energy. At Carleton, I hope to transmit the same waves of positive energy across the community and I believe that there should be no exception, hence do me a favor, and Smile please!

Anindita, you have written a very heart warming response to the prompt. Are you only supposed to write a statement response instead of an essay? If you are, then you have done a very good job with your response. It is totally on the mark as far as the prompt requirements are concerned. I would not want to change any of the portions for fear that it might change the overall message of the essay. Excellent work. By the way, are you within the word count or do you have some wiggle room? You many want to use all of the word count to your benefit if you have words to spare :-)

I love it! It shows how fun you can be and it conveys interest. Great job!

the limit is 150 and I'm exactly on that count..