Essay about the cause of me choosing my career path

Hello,

I have to write an essay about the causes of me choosing my career path. I'm having trouble writting a thesis statement and basically the entire essay. It also have to be 2 pages long.

Here is what i got so far....

All of my life up to this point, I have always dream of becoming a doctor. I know that being a doctor is not something that is very easy to achieve or that anybody can do it. It is something that I must work very hard for and I must have a very strong passion about it. Being a doctor, I will be able to make good money, help out my families, and help the people who are in need.

Can anyone help me?
Thank,
Mina

Good afternoon.

The prompt asks for the causes of your choice. Is it just the thought of making money and helping others that entices you to this career, or has there been some specific contact between yourself and a doctor that has helped influence you to this choice? What are the specific reasons you think being a doctor is a good idea? What about the drawbacks? Do they sway your decision at all?

Regards,
Gloria
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