mike2010 1 / 1 Oct 22, 2011 #1Instructions: Please elaborate briefly on your extracurricular activities or work experience.====================In the soft music, with eyes brimming with tears, we hugged each other like old friends. Suddenly, the memories of the 3-year volunteering at the orphanage were like mirages flickering before my eyes. I saw a little girl smiling after her cleft lips surgeon; I saw a little boy enjoying the Shanghai Expo while sitting in a new armchair; and I saw us volunteers like leprechauns flying to the pot of gold over the rainbow in the St. Patrick's Day fundraiser.Yet I didn't want the wonderful time we spent together to end with my graduation. So, I established the "XXX Charity Fund" in XXX with profits from my company. The fund is a dandelion of love, growing in the soils of my beloved land. Even if I am thousands of miles away in the future, I'll still water it with love. The dandelion's seeds will fly in every direction in the soft breeze. I wish the people who benefit from the fund would plant another dandelion; I wish the flowers of charity would flourish in the society.===============Please kindly provide any comment about grammar, style or content of this short answer.Your help is much appreciated. ^-^
AzharyN1 - / 6 Oct 22, 2011 #2very nice metaphors, and style, one thing u can do is maybe answer the question a bit more. Elaborate on what you did during your volunteer time, list some of the main things you used to do.Good luck:D
