The child within me; Johns Hopkins Supp/ Tell us something about you

2. Tell us something about yourself or your interests that we wouldn't learn by looking at the rest of your application materials. (While you should still pay attention to sentence structure and grammar, your response is meant as a way for us to get to know you, rather than a formal essay.)

I look up from my maniacal writing sample for English class - How is it already 11pm? I instantly tense up when I begin to think that I still have three more homework assignments to get through. I take a few minutes off, and head straight to my drawer, and unscrew the bright pink bottle. I dip the wand, and blow out the bubbles and delightfully watch them float across my room. Yes, I blow bubbles to de-stress myself. While it may seem random, even strange, to mostly everyone, it reminds me of my childhood. It represents a carefree time, when simple things were the most amazing things. It's also useful indicator of the child that's still left inside me. I am most definitely not finished growing; there is still so much of the world that I have not experienced. The child within me allows me to remain open minded and ready to explore as I venture into the college world.

Thanks for any advice!!

I love this, it's super unique and very well written. However, it does seem a little inconclusive. Though I cannot say exactly how you could fix this, perhaps relate it to your person as a whole or how it will affect you at Johns? I've responded to the same prompt, so if you could take a look at mine that would be lovely! :)

Good job and good luck!