I chose CCSS because I can fit in and it can help me adjust easily being an international student

Cambridge Centre for Sixth form Studies

When my friend recommended ccss for me,i had no idea it was going to be this good but by the time i went through the prospectus i decided i had found the perfect school.

i am Chimzim Chindah and i am a Nigerian.One of my major goals is to be better than i was yesterday when i sat for my o level IGCSE examination with this at the back of my mind i was able to have a good result. I also applied this other arts of my life and i was happy with the results.

One of my greatest achievements was to learn how to be an extrovert, I have always struggled with being an introvert and found it difficult to make new friends but when i started my resolution on being a better person i realized that i had to overcome this challenge, i started making friends who encouraged me to show my talents.

One thing i know i love doing is reading you will hardly see me without one if you ever wanted to make me happy just give me the latest Dan brown novel or an exiting thriller,I also have an unquenchable love for music before i would just write songs or listen to music but now i have started to learn how to play the guitar and piano.when i wrote a short story for my my friend she liked it and told me to continue writing this was how i discovered my writing abilities.Another passion of mine is cooking I love cooking and trying out new recipes .

I also enjoy playing tennis and hand ball with my family and sometimes i engage in gymnastics in a gymnasium near my house.

During the holidays I often volunteer to babysit for relatives and neighbors. I have also worked as a temp girl in Melvon Nigeria limited were I learnt the importance of organization .

When I told my parents I will like to study medcine in the UK,they told me I needed a good sixth form to help my transition into the university easy.they told me i needed a school that will widen my horizon and not just focus on my academic needs but educate me totally . I feel ccss will be able to offer me .

I chose ccss because i feel that I can fit in and it can ,help me adjust easily as an international student and also help me achieve my goals I like its small class size and its goal of bringing people of different cultural backgrounds together. I like the fact that they try to take care of each students individual needs.

Hi,
First, capitalizing every "I", using appropriate comma and dot for your sentences.
There are some spelling mistakes, too...Check it with your computer.

Yes, correct the capitalization... for example, the acronym:
When my friend recommended ccss CCSS, for me,i I had no idea it was going to be this good, but by the

I also applied this other arts parts of my life, and I was happy with the results.

One thing i know I love doing is reading. You will hardly see me without a book, and if you ever wanted to make ...

...me happy just give me the latest Dan brown Brown novel or an ...

exiting thriller. I also hav e an unquenchable

I don't think you should tell about cooking,, tennis, and everything else. Focus on explaining your academic goals.

:-)