What attribute of your personality are you most proud of, and how has it impacted your life so far? This could be your creativity, effective leadership, sense of humor, integrity, or anything else you'd like to tell us about.
Any advices, critics or suggestions are welcome.
Of all qualities, I take the greatest pride in my clear sense of goal. Comprised of the ability to read several steps ahead, unyielding determination and sheer perseverance, it often evoked awe and admiration in peers and seniors alike, especially in those who were previously sceptic towards my efforts.
Such a case was when I was trying to apply for Bauman university in Moscow. My school teachers kept saying that this university was out of my reach while classmates made fun of my goal of entering it. Despite all that, I continued to pursue my dream. Eventually, I was admitted and, when I brought the admission papers to school, those who had laughed and jeered at me quickly changed their attitude to that of commendation and respect.
Now, as I am trying to enter MIT, once again I get a great deal of mockery, this time from my work colleagues and university group mates. "It is impossible," some say, "You cannot do this". Even though they may be right, I have alredy given up on too much to turn back. So, once again, I am doing my best to stay true to my goal. After all, this is the path I have chosen, so I will walk it to the end.
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Any advices, critics or suggestions are welcome.
Of all qualities, I take the greatest pride in my clear sense of goal. Comprised of the ability to read several steps ahead, unyielding determination and sheer perseverance, it often evoked awe and admiration in peers and seniors alike, especially in those who were previously sceptic towards my efforts.
Such a case was when I was trying to apply for Bauman university in Moscow. My school teachers kept saying that this university was out of my reach while classmates made fun of my goal of entering it. Despite all that, I continued to pursue my dream. Eventually, I was admitted and, when I brought the admission papers to school, those who had laughed and jeered at me quickly changed their attitude to that of commendation and respect.
Now, as I am trying to enter MIT, once again I get a great deal of mockery, this time from my work colleagues and university group mates. "It is impossible," some say, "You cannot do this". Even though they may be right, I have alredy given up on too much to turn back. So, once again, I am doing my best to stay true to my goal. After all, this is the path I have chosen, so I will walk it to the end.
(211 words)