Unanswered [1] | Urgent [0]
  

Home / Undergraduate   % width   Posts: 4


Columbia short response (Rigorous, diversified, and accessible)



yasin391 6 / 22  
Dec 29, 2008   #1
Here is the prompt for columbia's short answer.

Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why:

Rigorous, diversified, and accessible are some of the many appealing aspects of Columbia that attacts me. Looking at the curriculum and its organization, I believe that Columbia presents a rigorous challenge to my educational aspirations. In addition Columbia has diversity in its population of students which will enable me to cooperate and interact with a wide range of people. Additionally, the accessibility of Columbia and in the heart of Manhattan draws me more to this school. I think that such qualities in a college will allow me to learn the most I can.

can you please edit my response to see if there is any errors, need for change or incoherence.

surfsandiego 3 / 14  
Dec 29, 2008   #2
Personally, I think it's too vague. You could find everything you listed at every university, except for the Manhattan part.
akashnegi 8 / 20  
Dec 29, 2008   #3
the response is good but it is too generic. try to add something different. surfsandiego was right..
EF_Kevin 8 / 13053  
Dec 30, 2008   #4
Rigorous, diversified, and accessible are some of the many appealing aspects of Columbia that attract me.

Looking at the curriculum and its organization, I believe that Columbia presents a welcome challenge to my educational aspirations.

In addition Columbia has diversity in its population of students which will enable me to cooperate with and interact with a wide range of people.

Additionally, the accessibility of Columbia to the heart of Manhattan draws me more to this school. I think that such qualities in a college will allow me to learn the most I can.

You should say something about what you hope to study there!

:)


Home / Undergraduate / Columbia short response (Rigorous, diversified, and accessible)
Do You Need
Academic Writing
or Editing Help?
Fill out one of these forms:

Graduate Writing / Editing:
GraduateWriter form ◳

Best Essay Service:
CustomPapers form ◳

Excellence in Editing:
Rose Editing ◳

AI-Paper Rewriting:
Robot Rewrite ◳

Academic AI Writer:
Custom AI Writer ◳