Here is the prompt for columbia's short answer.
Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why:
Rigorous, diversified, and accessible are some of the many appealing aspects of Columbia that attacts me. Looking at the curriculum and its organization, I believe that Columbia presents a rigorous challenge to my educational aspirations. In addition Columbia has diversity in its population of students which will enable me to cooperate and interact with a wide range of people. Additionally, the accessibility of Columbia and in the heart of Manhattan draws me more to this school. I think that such qualities in a college will allow me to learn the most I can.
can you please edit my response to see if there is any errors, need for change or incoherence.
Please tell us what you find most appealing about Columbia and why:
Rigorous, diversified, and accessible are some of the many appealing aspects of Columbia that attacts me. Looking at the curriculum and its organization, I believe that Columbia presents a rigorous challenge to my educational aspirations. In addition Columbia has diversity in its population of students which will enable me to cooperate and interact with a wide range of people. Additionally, the accessibility of Columbia and in the heart of Manhattan draws me more to this school. I think that such qualities in a college will allow me to learn the most I can.
can you please edit my response to see if there is any errors, need for change or incoherence.