Commitment and care; Lehigh/ Unique aspect

As a prospective business major, a unique aspect of Lehigh that interests me the most is the commitment and care that is shown to the undergraduate students through their four years at the College of Business and Economics. Lehigh helps their students plot a path to success unlike any other business school in the country. Unlike many schools that let students make their own decisions, Lehigh has formulated a successful formula and curriculum to ensure the success of their undergraduates. A very special part of Lehigh's curriculum occurs in the third year of study. The faculty and Career Services help undergraduates find summer internships all across the United States and even overseas. To me, this is a very unique and attractive aspect of Lehigh University. With job competition rising every year, I want to go to a school that can help set me up for a job and success in the future. Lehigh's outstanding business school and its unique approach to undergraduate students is exactly what I am looking for.

what do you think??
harsh feedback please

Are you saying you don't want to make your own decisions... not exactly a good aspect in the minds of the AdCom, i'm sure

What is the question??

Many schools provide this opportunity, it's called Career Services. I think you should find a different answer to the question. Although I don't know what the question is, I know that I can replace "Lehigh" with any other school and "College of Business and Economics" with any other college and "business major" with any other major