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Common App Short Answer
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet (150 words or fewer).
I participate in founding and flourishing the sustainability group this year for promoting necessary awareness on environmental and energy sources issues in my college and the community. I began my work with a presentation about Peak Oil, which was the greatest aspect to raise the awareness on energy resources. After that, I have engaged on organizing a compost project in my college through the efforts from building hand-made woody composter to publicizing the compost concept to my surrounding. A solar panel project is ongoing to save electricity and I will help with the physics technique part. I have to always actively involved to seek for new point and come up with creative idea to drive our project going further because there was no a regular road to follow. I'm glad to notice the change of attention level toward the environment my schoolmates had, and I gain satisfaction from making the effort and making a difference. (155)
Thanks again!
Feel free to criticize! I need to narrow my answer because I have 5 words more.
Thank you so much!
Common App Short Answer
Please briefly elaborate on one of your extracurricular activities or work experiences in the space below or on an attached sheet (150 words or fewer).
I participate in founding and flourishing the sustainability group this year for promoting necessary awareness on environmental and energy sources issues in my college and the community. I began my work with a presentation about Peak Oil, which was the greatest aspect to raise the awareness on energy resources. After that, I have engaged on organizing a compost project in my college through the efforts from building hand-made woody composter to publicizing the compost concept to my surrounding. A solar panel project is ongoing to save electricity and I will help with the physics technique part. I have to always actively involved to seek for new point and come up with creative idea to drive our project going further because there was no a regular road to follow. I'm glad to notice the change of attention level toward the environment my schoolmates had, and I gain satisfaction from making the effort and making a difference. (155)
Thanks again!
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