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In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).
For both the winter and spring season of 11th grade, I participated in my school's theatre program. I'd never tried theatre before, and I went in thinking it'd be easy. After all, what's so hard about reading lines? I was pleasantly surprised that this was not so; theatre is much more than just reciting lines. Actors have to be cognizant of how they present themselves in a multitude of ways: body position, volume, position... I had to throw away my characteristic demeanor--which I'd never given much thought to before--and mold it to a fictional situation. Due to my newfound awareness of my self-presentation, I was now able to better moderate how I came across in general, such as my tendency to mumble or lean on one leg as opposed to both. Through imitating someone that wasn't real, I grasped a better hold on myself and how I came across to other people.
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer).
For both the winter and spring season of 11th grade, I participated in my school's theatre program. I'd never tried theatre before, and I went in thinking it'd be easy. After all, what's so hard about reading lines? I was pleasantly surprised that this was not so; theatre is much more than just reciting lines. Actors have to be cognizant of how they present themselves in a multitude of ways: body position, volume, position... I had to throw away my characteristic demeanor--which I'd never given much thought to before--and mold it to a fictional situation. Due to my newfound awareness of my self-presentation, I was now able to better moderate how I came across in general, such as my tendency to mumble or lean on one leg as opposed to both. Through imitating someone that wasn't real, I grasped a better hold on myself and how I came across to other people.