"Please briefly elaborate (150 words or fewer) on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experiences).
I have a passion for mentally challenging activities. This is why Xiangqi, or Chinese Chess, is my favorite pastime. I have played it for five years. Through Xiangqi, I have improved my logical-thinking and become humble and patient.
Victory used to mean everything to me. Through Xiangqi, I learned to embrace defeat over victory and value mistakes. Mistakes are inevitable with each move, a reality to chance theory, as each randomized event may have unexpected consequences. In Xiangqi, one careless move can cost the whole game. It is more important to recognize my mistakes and learn not to repeat the same mistake twice.
Xiangqi equates how we all lead life. Life is also full of unknowns, and unknowns lead to making mistakes and blunders. Each move is a sequence of life; each game a lesson in life. I have accepted failure as the mother of success.
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I have a passion for mentally challenging activities. This is why Xiangqi, or Chinese Chess, is my favorite pastime. I have played it for five years. Through Xiangqi, I have improved my logical-thinking and become humble and patient.
Victory used to mean everything to me. Through Xiangqi, I learned to embrace defeat over victory and value mistakes. Mistakes are inevitable with each move, a reality to chance theory, as each randomized event may have unexpected consequences. In Xiangqi, one careless move can cost the whole game. It is more important to recognize my mistakes and learn not to repeat the same mistake twice.
Xiangqi equates how we all lead life. Life is also full of unknowns, and unknowns lead to making mistakes and blunders. Each move is a sequence of life; each game a lesson in life. I have accepted failure as the mother of success.
1. An suggested ending sentence.
2. Grammar check.
3. Any other changes.
Please help and I'll help yours (link). Thank you and merry christmas!