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The following is my <1000 character response for the common app. I think it needs a lot of work, so I would love to get some edits/feedback!
For the past three three years I have volunteered at a hospice. My friends poke fun at the somber nature of my work, but I am grateful to have met people who view every new day as a gift. Filing paperwork and checking up with patients has benefited me beyond the satisfaction of doing something meaningful-when my mood is colored gray by a setback, their optimism reminds me to avoid dwelling on the past. And in a way, exposure to death has made me value my friends even more. Before volunteering I prioritized academic success, but for most patients nearing the end, nothing is more important than having people who will miss them. This simple truth has made me realize that it's fine to go out and enjoy a movie with friends, because while grades are important, they won't last a lifetime. The brave individuals I encountered at hospice, despite being on opposite ends of life from myself, have taught me how to live.
The following is my <1000 character response for the common app. I think it needs a lot of work, so I would love to get some edits/feedback!
For the past three three years I have volunteered at a hospice. My friends poke fun at the somber nature of my work, but I am grateful to have met people who view every new day as a gift. Filing paperwork and checking up with patients has benefited me beyond the satisfaction of doing something meaningful-when my mood is colored gray by a setback, their optimism reminds me to avoid dwelling on the past. And in a way, exposure to death has made me value my friends even more. Before volunteering I prioritized academic success, but for most patients nearing the end, nothing is more important than having people who will miss them. This simple truth has made me realize that it's fine to go out and enjoy a movie with friends, because while grades are important, they won't last a lifetime. The brave individuals I encountered at hospice, despite being on opposite ends of life from myself, have taught me how to live.