Hello! Could you please have a look at my CommonApp Short Answer? The exact prompt is:
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer)
They never cry. The realization hit me as I sang one of the younger babies to sleep. It was my first time helping at the orphanage and disabled people's asylum, and I was not sure what to expect. Loudness or violence? Maybe. But not the calm silence that prevailed everywhere, even in the babies' ward.
The reason? "Crying never got them anything, so they gave up", said a busy nurse. Instead, the babies, children, adults and elderly alike showed their hunger for warmth and affection in their grateful eyes and I felt guilty that I held them only to let go again, too soon.
No, I can't single-handedly bring about world peace or end starvation. But I can reach out into someone else's darkness and bring a little light, share a human connection. Connections are, after all, how we define our identity and meaning in life. We are not made to cry alone.
Thank You!
In the space provided below, please elaborate on one of your activities (extracurricular, personal activities, or work experience)(150 words or fewer)
They never cry. The realization hit me as I sang one of the younger babies to sleep. It was my first time helping at the orphanage and disabled people's asylum, and I was not sure what to expect. Loudness or violence? Maybe. But not the calm silence that prevailed everywhere, even in the babies' ward.
The reason? "Crying never got them anything, so they gave up", said a busy nurse. Instead, the babies, children, adults and elderly alike showed their hunger for warmth and affection in their grateful eyes and I felt guilty that I held them only to let go again, too soon.
No, I can't single-handedly bring about world peace or end starvation. But I can reach out into someone else's darkness and bring a little light, share a human connection. Connections are, after all, how we define our identity and meaning in life. We are not made to cry alone.
Thank You!