University of Waterloo admission essay
Hey this is an answer I have made to one of my questions on my University of Waterloo admission information form. There is a 900 character limit on the answer. Can I get some feedback on it? Thank you in advance!
Please tell us about your educational goals, your interest in your chosen program(s), and your reasons for applying to the University of Waterloo. If you have applied to more than one program please discuss your interest in each program. (900 character limit)
Pursuing a degree that is both challenging and fascinating has been a significant ambition of mine. I believe that Waterloo's renowned computer science and software engineering programs are the perfect fit for me in fulfilling these aspirations. Computer science has always appealed to me because of its emphasis on problem solving and the endless opportunities for creativity in building projects. I also find great fulfillment in working with others and contributing to a team, something that is crucial in the fields of computer science and software engineering. I also hope to one day start my own entrepreneurship with Waterloo's Velocity program and believe that with the business-computer science program, my personal experiences with freelancing, and the experience I will gain through Waterloo's one-of-a-kind cooperative education program, I can make this dream a reality.