The computer's world does not show its power until you start to understand it; Collage Application

Thanks to everyone helping with the first part in my past thread. I changed it a lot and would be grateful to hear your thoughts.

Word limit : 500

any applicants to college are unsure about eventual majors. What factors led you to your interest?

The computer's world does not show its power until you start to understand it. Afterwards, the changes in how you see the world are what keep you going forward. Everything seems more logical. No one but a programmer can understand this evolution comprehensibly. More you learn about this world, more eager you become. Right now, after all these years of programming, I believe the one thing making me joyful is knowing that I have a program to work on. Programming is not anymore a job, but is a joyful and relaxing hobby on which I am willing to spend even my spare time.

What concept in your anticipated major were you most proud of mastering?

When you are doing a project, mostly there is a teacher helping you and ensuring you that everything is going to be done by the deadline. However, for the 2013 IranOpen, my situation was nowhere near comfortable. I had to work with the Kinect sensor, in a limited, short time, and without the presence of anyone familiar with the sensor. It came across as impossible for anyone who knew about the situation.

However, I was a programmers, confident about my skills and abilities.

I would suggest reading your responses aloud so you can better manage the grammar and flow. You can also make some sentences more concise. Remember, more is not better. Colleges want you to be able to say more with less. For example, "Right now, after all these years of programming, I believe the one thing bringing me joy is knowing that I have a program to work on. Programming is no longer a job, but is a joyful and relaxing hobby on which I enjoy ."

Hope this helped :)

I hope it would seem better know. :)

The computer's world does not show its power until you start to understand it. Afterwards, the changes in how you see the world are what keep you going forward. Everything seems more logical. No one but a programmer can understand this evolution comprehensibly. More you learn about this world, more eager you become. Right now, after all these years of programming, I believe the one thing bringing me joy is knowing that I have a program to work on. Programming is no longer a job, but a pleasing and relaxing hobby on which I enjoy to spend even my spare time.

After participating in numerous projects related to computer science and different competitions, I feel that nothing can seal me from flourishing in this world. A lucky person is who had found what in the world best fits them. This is my world, with which I trust I can make so many changes to make the globe a better place for all the human beings.

I have experienced a great deal of positions in different, sometimes even not related, fields before finding my real interest, and these understandings are what make my choice worthwhile, and are what ensure me of the validity of my choices.

When you are doing a project, mostly there is a teacher helping you and ensuring you that everything is going to be done by the deadline. However, for the 2013 IranOpen, my situation was nowhere near comfortable. I had to work with the Kinect sensor, in a limited, short time, and without the presence of anyone familiar with it. It came across as impossible for anyone knowing about the situation.

However, I was a programmer, confident about my skills and abilities. The experience was one I always would feel gratified about. It was holiday, and we were spending our day and night at school working on the project. I needed to learn image processing with LabView Compiler to understand the commands of the user. And who could believe I finished it right before the deadline reaching?

It was one of my most successful activities, which caused our project to achieve the award of "The Use of Modern Technologies". Not the award, nor the time I spent, were worthwhile, but how I learned about my ability of managing such a challenging situation was my real award; the feeling of confident that surely would be one of the reasons of me succeeding in my future life.

Sa1na, content wise, the essay is alright. So let's just work on cleaning up the grammar and sentence problems ok? Here are my tips:

The computer's world does not show its power until ...
No one but a programmer can understand this evolution comprehensibly . More you learn about this world, ...
... but a pleasing and relaxing hobby on which I enjoy to spend even my spare time.

- The more you learn about this world,the more eager you become to learn even more ... relaxing hobby that I enjoy doing even during my spare time.

After participating in numerous projects related to computer science and different competitions , I feel that nothing can seal me from flourishing in this world. A lucky person is who had found what in the world best fits them . This is my world, with which I trust I can make so many changes to make the globe a better place for all the human beings.

I have experienced a great deal of positions in different, sometimes even not related , fields before finding my real interest, and these understandings are what make my choice worthwhile, and are what ensure me of the validity of my choices.

- I feel that nothing can stop me...I am a lucky person who has found my niche in this world and I have no intention of leaving. ... sometimes unrelated fields... andit is because of these experiences that I realized that I made the right career choice for me.


- I believe that this paragraph can be better said another way. Here is my take on this paragraph:
It was at the 2013Iran Open when I first became extremely proud of becoming a programmer. I had to work with a Kinect sensor within a limited amount of time without any technical assistance or professor / trainer around to advise me. For anyone else it would have been an impossible situation but not for me. Using the LabView compiler, I was able to reprogram the sensor to do what the competition requirements dictated. I will admit I was a bit apprehensive at first but as as I became intensely involved in the task before me, I came to realize that I was accomplishing what was expected of me as a programmer. Indeed, I was a programmer and my accomplishment at the competition was the only proof I needed to silence any doubts I might have still had up to that time.

Here's hoping my suggestions work for you :-)