I think your sentences are wordy so these are just my suggestions, if you can find a use for them then great, if you don't then it's OK also.
Isn't it funny
when you think
thatHaha your first paragraph confuse me
People should be themselves, and speak their mind. To not be afraid if something is not making them happy.
merge this two--> People should not be afraid to speak their mind when something makes them unhappy.
People shouldn't have to feel as though they have to go behind other people's backs to vent their feelings. It's not really fair as that person is not there to defend themselves and it is a shame that they have to do that.
--> There is no reason to stab someone in the back when that person is not there to express his/her own opinion ( I assume that's what you mean)
We take pride ourselves in beingourselves as being intelligence and smart exquisite creatures offrom God, but we cannot learn to live in peace with one another.
how being in smart and peaceful should has anything to do with each other?
Instead, we feverishly build barriers just to keep other people at bay.
People often suspect others of anything, everything, whether it is culture, religion, policies, education, size, shape color, status, andoranythingelse in between.
doubts
, suspicions, or harsh judgment
interest, attentive
listening, and appropriate responses
four common needs:
the need for attention,
the need for connection,
the need for validation, and
the need for belonging.
. Through better understanding others, we better understand ourselves
--> We understand ourselves better through others
Furthermore, when we leave this world, all that we leave left behind are memories, and for other people whose lives we have affected our family and friends.
(just a suggestion)
Five people who honestly and truly understand you, love you, and will be there for you no matter what.
--> why so specific, since you generalized your topic so not every one is the same (one family member, one spouse, and three friends?)
Family cannot be
tolddistinguished by genes
Another is a love, a true love, the one person who you were destined to spend the rest of your life loving. If you don't believe in destiny or that anything is planned, then call it coincidence that you have feelings that you cannot go without them and that your life is utterly and completely revolving around them.
--> work on this sentence, some part or unnecessary (like the destine and coincidence part)
These people just completely understand you
--> again, you took it to the extreme
Whether it's because they are very much like you, or the complete opposite, they can somehow understand your being, interpret your unspoken words and be able to listen when you need to talk, be a shoulder to lean on when you need support.
--> The similarities and differences cannot separate them from understanding your unspoken words, or becoming a shoulder for you to lean on in times of need.
And you need a stronger conclusion. Good Luck :)