Prompt: Describe the world you come from; for example, your family, clubs, school, community, city, or town. How has that world shaped your dreams and aspirations? (200-250 words)
I come from a country where everyone seeks for success, but where no one cares about the development of the society as a whole. A place where one is able to spot kids on the streets dying of hunger, and people drowning in money that pay minimal attention to their surroundings. I come from a country where buildings do not even meet the 'minimum level of safety' requirement and where the construction of low quality infrastructures has spread rapidly. I come from a world I'd like to change. I want to be able to ameliorate the issues and flaws I'm exposed to in my society. For this reason I want to study engineering, to be able to apply my mathematical and scientific abilities to seek for innovative solutions to the problems the world is presently facing.
Every morning on my way to school I'm able to spot the image of poor kids sitting in front of poorly constructed houses, some of which do not even have windows, roofs, or doors. Houses are meant to provide shelter and protection, but these houses are not even near to offering these privileges to its inhabitants. Someday I wish I could be able to stand in front of the people living on these houses and say "I'm here to help!" Studying civil engineering will make this wish a reality, as it will strengthen my skills in mathematics, science and construction, which I could use for the building of new residences and for the establishment of a new world.
I accept any kind of help! Critiques, Insults (:P), Grammar correction, redundancy corrections, Detailed corrections. Specially: Context correction and Transition of ideas correction!! THANKS a lot in advance :)
I come from a country where everyone seeks for success, but where no one cares about the development of the society as a whole. A place where one is able to spot kids on the streets dying of hunger, and people drowning in money that pay minimal attention to their surroundings. I come from a country where buildings do not even meet the 'minimum level of safety' requirement and where the construction of low quality infrastructures has spread rapidly. I come from a world I'd like to change. I want to be able to ameliorate the issues and flaws I'm exposed to in my society. For this reason I want to study engineering, to be able to apply my mathematical and scientific abilities to seek for innovative solutions to the problems the world is presently facing.
Every morning on my way to school I'm able to spot the image of poor kids sitting in front of poorly constructed houses, some of which do not even have windows, roofs, or doors. Houses are meant to provide shelter and protection, but these houses are not even near to offering these privileges to its inhabitants. Someday I wish I could be able to stand in front of the people living on these houses and say "I'm here to help!" Studying civil engineering will make this wish a reality, as it will strengthen my skills in mathematics, science and construction, which I could use for the building of new residences and for the establishment of a new world.
I accept any kind of help! Critiques, Insults (:P), Grammar correction, redundancy corrections, Detailed corrections. Specially: Context correction and Transition of ideas correction!! THANKS a lot in advance :)