My Cousin is My Other Mother

Topic: My Cousin

Among the entire relative I know, I feel that my cousin is only person to whom I can feel

like my mother. Her name is DeourngSocheata; she is the eldest among six siblings of the

family. My cousin is in her mid-40s now, but still looks very beautiful. She also has a daughter

who is in her grade 9. My cousin is a strong woman; she works hard from dawn to dusk to

support the family's living. But she does not work at the moment, for health reasons. Instead she

stays at home and helps my aunt taking care of the housework, which is still a very tough work.

Ever since I moved to live in her family,my cousin has made me feel very comfortable. She

treats me just like her own son. In fact, she does not event allow me to help with any chores at

all, for she wants me to just study hard. My cousin is a kind of person to whom I can share

everything with. She is very good at giving advice, especially when I feel down about my

performance at school. She's very understanding of someone my age. My cousin and my mother

share a lot of familiar characteristics, and most of all they look a lot like each other; that is

probably why I feel happiness when she is around. My commitment is to care for her as I care for

my mother, for them both are the most important people in my life.

This is my very first paragraph about my cousin, and also my first post in this page. I think I have a lot of errors in this paragraph, so please help me anyone.

Very sweet...

Out of all of my relatives , I feel that my cousin is the only person whom I feel is like my mother. Her name is Deourng Socheata ; she is the eldest of the six siblings of her family. My cousin is in her mid-40s now, but still looks very beautiful. She also has a daughter who is in her grade 9. My cousin is a strong woman; she works hard from dawn to dusk to support her family . But she does not work at the moment because of health reasons. Instead, she stays at home and helps my aunt take care of the housework, which is still a very tough work. Ever since I moved to live in her family, my cousin has made me feel very comfortable. She treats me just like her own son. In fact, she does not even allow me to help with any chores at all, for she wants me to just study hard. My cousin is the kind of person with whom I can share everything with. She is very good at giving advice, especially when I feel down about my performance at school. She's very understanding of someone my age. My cousin and my mother share a lot of similar characteristics, and most of all they look a lot like each other; that is probably why I feel happy when she is around. My commitment is to care for her as I care for my mother, for they are the most important people in my life.

thank thank, thank you so much Didgeridoo. Is there any comment you would like to add. And if you don't mind i want to know you, for I am going to put your name in my editor list in this paragraph assignment. It's very important to me. Thank you again my friend.

Nope! This looks really good to me. And do you need anything besides my name, Alexandra Robertson?

I still have a lot to learn. Some advices from a professional like you would be very good for me in order to improve. And thanks again

You'll get there! And I'm hardly a professional, haha, but thank you for the compliment! :D