'creative and imaginative person' - Common app Supplement for film major

-In the space below please explain your interests in the major(s) listed above. Are there additional academic interests you would like us to know about?

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Since I was a little girl, I am fascinated with the art of what a camera can do. It was only when I started producing behind the scenes short movies of my school's events, that I was able to realize how powerful movie creation was, and will alway be, to me.

Throughout my freshman year, I was constantly involved in small plays. In addition, I had the chance to write and direct a 30-minute play for my Portuguese class final test.

I consider myself a very creative and imaginative person full of new and innovating ideas, so majoring in film production would help me get the tools I need to use my potential to the fullest, and also, I would be able to do what makes me proud and happy.

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Please I need feedback because my application deadline is in 4 days!!!
Thank you a lot!

Since I was a little girl, I was fascinated with the art of what a camera can do. It was only when I started producing behind the scenes short movies based on my school's events, that I was able to realizerealized how powerful movie creation was, and will always be, to me.

Throughout my freshman year, I was constantly involved in small plays. In addition, I also had the chance to write and direct a 30-minute play for my Portuguese class final test.final test in Portugese class.

I consider myself to be a very creative and imaginative person, full of new and innovating ideas, so majoring in film production would help me get the tools and necessary skills I need to use my potential to the fullest, and also, I would be able to do what makes me proud and happy. to become successful in the one thing I am truly passionate about.

Just some changes I made. Overall, it was very well written. Hope I could help :)

hey karlacnavas721!
thank you a lot for your help.
I really appreciate you taking your time to gve me feedback.
I'll make sure to change the errors :)