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Which department at MIT appeals to you and why?



metalstriker 6 / 16  
Dec 31, 2012   #1
The physics and the engineering programs strongly appeal to me.
I aspire to be free of the laws that bind us by creating that which will enhance our abilities albeit externally.
I want to build flying machines.
I want the effects of pressure to remain constant, in whichever environment we're in.
I intend to work with the many other professionals around the globe to come up with something to change the world in profound ways; building quantum- teleportation devices, succeeding in reviving a person who has undergone cryonics, manufacturing food from rearranged elements and many others besides.

I want to revolutionize technology and I believe that the research, researchers, laboratories and facilities at MIT will lead me to my goal.

What do you guys think of this? Too far out weird and unrealistic for a serious essay...conventionally speaking

ershad193 14 / 321  
Dec 31, 2012   #2
Too far out weird and unrealistic for a serious essay

Definitely

I think they are looking for something more specific than revolutionizing technology :P

No seriously, you need to write this in the conventional way. Those guys probably want to see how you do the homework on the university and the department, your knowledge on the courses being taught at the department, etc.

Just out of interest, why do you want this

I want the effects of pressure to remain constant, in whichever environment we're in.

I think a lot of people would be out of work if that were to happen ;)


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