Duke is a liberal arts college with strong science programs; Why Duke?

"(Lady Gaga): Guess What's Happening at Duke" was the email that made me fall in love.
While I learned that Lady Gaga was actually a new genus of fern, I also learned about Duke's research and was immediately attracted to it. I want to learn from incredible faculty such as Professor Pryer, who discovered Lady Gaga. Under such guidance, I believe I can contribute to Duke's impressive repertoire.

Furthermore, I love that Duke is a liberal arts college with strong science programs. Although I'm interested in science, I'm still undecided and loathe to halt my non-science related studies. A liberal arts education would cultivate my interests in different fields.

Whether by adding to class discussions, participating in clubs such as Adopt a Grandparent, or contributing to research, I will bring enthusiasm, creativity, and energy to make a positive impact during my time here. So I must pop the question: Duke, will you take me to be part of your freshmen class of 2014?

I'm not to crazy about this essay so feedback would be great. Also the word limit is 150 words but I currently have 163 so suggestions for cutting down the word count would be fantastic.

Decent essay. I have to say the last sentence is a bit desperate; you are practically asking them if they can accept you. While your essay should reflect your research on Duke, it should also show a bit of your strength. I think it would be wise to cut out the last sentence or at least rephrase it to make room to add a bit more about your personal strength. Can you please look over my essay? "My interest in mechanical engineering"- UIUC prompt

tell a story, i like the beginning build from that instead of stating stuff you love about duke

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Talk about how you'll specifically use what you get at duke to further your learning. Good essay otherwise. Read my Yale sup?