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'earthquake like this one' - UT essay B----An issue of importance to you



virgousa 2 / 2  
Nov 27, 2011   #1
Choose an issue of importance to you-the issue could be personal, school related, local, political, or international in scope-and write an essay in which you explain the significance of that issue to yourself, your family, your community, or your generation.

earthquake like this one



Never in my life have I experienced an earthquake like this one. Never in my life have I been moved so much by the things happening around me. This is all because of the earthquake happened in Sichuan on May 12, 2008.The earthquake was so destructive that tens of thousands of people died or were badly wounded, many others, if not injured, were deeply hurt by the horror of the nightmare or the deep sorrow of losing their family and their friends.Maybe this hurt will take many years or even a lifetime to heal.

Although the earthquake did not happen in Shanghai, it did affect the wheather of the city.I still can't forget that day,when I looked up to the sky and noticed that the sky was not blue and clear anymore, instead, it suddenly changed into dark grey and seems like something horrible is happening .

I couldn't imagine if the quake happened here in Shanghai.That must be horrible! Though the quake brings away many lives, we can't grief endlessly but shall stir ourselves and engage in the reconstruction. I started to question myself what have I done for those people in the erathquake-hit regions? The answer is nothing.

Once I decided to do something, I would never quit until I make it. So I went to Sichuan as a volunteer to teach English in local primary school during my summer vication. Since the school building was badly demaged during the earthquake, the students need to study in a temporary classroom built by the government. The vile environment for the people there made me reflect upon myself that they had an urgent need for help and care from the ouside world,and what I can do is to build a bridge between those people and the ourside world.

Consequently, I joined a charity organization in my school called 'the Nexus' at once and soon became the special assistant of it.After that , I advocated that the club should hold some activities or competitions among all international schools in Shanghai, and the money we gained by selling tickets can be all donated to the the families that were affected by the Earthquake in Sichuan.I took charge of the activity venue and its promotion video .Also, I was responsible for connecting the student council of the others international schools in Shanghai. Joining this organization not only helped me to accomplish my goal in helping the Sichuan people to reconstruct their homes, but also gave me the opportunity to gain the ability and experiences to manage and run such large-scale activity fluently.

I don't really know how to add a conlusion to my essay...can anyone help?!Also, my grammar is not that good ...XD Thx a lot!

calvinchin92 2 / 3  
Nov 27, 2011   #2
... was badly damaged during the earthquake,
... from the outside world,... and the outside world

(I think if it would be preferable if u split this sentence into few sentences)


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