please help me with grammar and choice of words. Also fell free to edit it if you think that will make it better. thank you.
The melodious sound produce by the gongon drum, the fluency and matured skills exhibited by the dance orchestra, the poignant speeches of the various enlighten chiefs and the magnificent crowd of people from different cultural background are signs of a grand festival one cannot afford to miss.
This social gathering has made me more gregarious and eloquent in life. Associating me with my peers from sects or different cultural backgrounds was a daunting task. I used to shy away from them because of the fact that, I will be mocked at. Anytime I met my peers in a group discussion, I never contributed if the idea was somehow out of scope or should I say wrong.
I am now able to associate myself with anyone from different background, tolerate their views even if it is contrary to mine. I was able to achieve this by associating myself with different people and learning much about them in every festival I visit.
I will make use of this developed character in my life. There is the saying that two heads are better than one, therefore being able cope easily with people will help a lot in finding problems to our problems.
The melodious sound produce by the gongon drum, the fluency and matured skills exhibited by the dance orchestra, the poignant speeches of the various enlighten chiefs and the magnificent crowd of people from different cultural background are signs of a grand festival one cannot afford to miss.
This social gathering has made me more gregarious and eloquent in life. Associating me with my peers from sects or different cultural backgrounds was a daunting task. I used to shy away from them because of the fact that, I will be mocked at. Anytime I met my peers in a group discussion, I never contributed if the idea was somehow out of scope or should I say wrong.
I am now able to associate myself with anyone from different background, tolerate their views even if it is contrary to mine. I was able to achieve this by associating myself with different people and learning much about them in every festival I visit.
I will make use of this developed character in my life. There is the saying that two heads are better than one, therefore being able cope easily with people will help a lot in finding problems to our problems.
